Question

13．下面文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，要求你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在該句下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：
1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Patience is of great importance in our daily life．Once I waited a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past，but no bus came．Both upset and annoyed，I decided to walk on feet．But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived．I thought if I had waited for one more minute，I would have caught it．If I chose to take a next bus，I would have to wait for other 30 minutes．Only then do I realized my problem．Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in．now whenever I am close to lose my patience，I'll think of this experience．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文主要描述了作者通過自己在停車點(diǎn)等公共汽車，沒有耐心而錯(cuò)過該次班車的經(jīng)歷，體會(huì)到了有耐心在日常生活中的重要性．

解答 Patience is of great importance in our daily life．Once I waited∧a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past，
                                                                                             for                                                 passed
but no bus came．Both upset and annoyed，I decided to walk onfeet．But no sooner had I left when the bus 
                                                                                             foot                                       than
arrived．I thought if I had waited for one more minute，I would have caught it．If I chose to take anext bus，
                                                                                                                                               the
I would have to wait for other  30 minutes．Only then do I realized my problem．Being impatient will possible
                                another                                    did                                                                 possibly
waste all the effort that we have put it in．now whenever I am close tolosemy patience，I'll think of this experience
                                                    去掉                                           losing
1：waited 和 a 之間加for 考查介詞搭配． wait不及物動(dòng)詞，wait for sb/sth 等待…所以應(yīng)在waited 和 a 之間加for．
2：past→passed 考查同音詞．  past 介詞，經(jīng)過，過去，此處缺少謂語，故past→passed．
3：feet→foot  考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)．on foot固定詞組，步行．
4：when→than  考查短語搭配．no sooner…than…固定用法，一…就…
5：a→the  考查冠詞．此處next bus應(yīng)是特指，所以用the．
6：other→another 考查代詞． another+數(shù)字+復(fù)數(shù)名詞=數(shù)字+more+復(fù)數(shù)名詞，固定用法"再，又多少多少…"．
7：do→did  考查時(shí)態(tài)．本文描述的是過去的一次經(jīng)歷，應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)，所以用did．
8：possible→possibly  考查副詞．修飾動(dòng)詞要用副詞，
9：去掉it 考查定語從句． that引導(dǎo)定語從句，并在從句中作賓語，因此it多于，去掉
10：lose→losing  考查動(dòng)名詞． 本句中be close to 接近…to 是介詞，因此用動(dòng)名詞losing．

點(diǎn)評 改錯(cuò)題要注意代詞，連詞以及詞性、人稱的轉(zhuǎn)化．
做好短文改錯(cuò)題，可以從以下三方面去考慮：1．快速閱讀短文，如抓住中心思想，從整體上對短文有個(gè)了解． 2．充分運(yùn)用語言的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，從句型結(jié)構(gòu)、詞的變化、詞類選擇、詞的搭配、習(xí)慣用法出發(fā)，進(jìn)行分析判斷，盡快找出錯(cuò)誤在何處． 3．重視整體和語境，從上下文關(guān)系中找出表達(dá)連接關(guān)系或邏輯關(guān)系的詞或詞組，判斷是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系還是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，是因果關(guān)系還是讓步關(guān)系．