Question

許多歐洲國(guó)家將9月22日設(shè)為“無(wú)車日”。請(qǐng)結(jié)合我國(guó)目前的現(xiàn)狀，如交通堵塞、環(huán)境

污染、車禍頻發(fā)等，寫一篇100—120詞的英語(yǔ)短文，說(shuō)明自己對(duì)“無(wú)車日”的認(rèn)識(shí)。

注意：1．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2．生詞：無(wú)車日—No Cars Day/ No-car Day

As we know, with the development of economy, the number of cars is increasing very rapidly, thus causing some social problems.                                                   

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Answer 1

【答案】

As we know, with the development of economy, the number of cars is increasing very rapidly, thus causing some social problems. For example, people are often caught in a traffic jam, especially at rush hour and car accidents have occurred more often than ever. What’s more, the car is one of the major problems resulting in global warming. So I think it’s a good idea for many European countries to set September 22nd as “No Cars Day”.

Although a one-day campaign can hardly generate enough long-term influence to change people’s behaviour, at least, it can remind people of the harm that cars do to our society, and encourage more people to travel by bicycle or public transport. In my view, it’s not the day but the awareness of all the people to help solve social problems that really matters.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文的寫作。本文的話題是無(wú)煙日，需要考生具體從交通堵塞、環(huán)境污染、車禍頻發(fā)三個(gè)方面展開，最后說(shuō)明自己支持無(wú)煙日的活動(dòng)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：考查開放性作文的寫作。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：開放性作文只給出了一個(gè)話題，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地很大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。