Question

【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面一篇短文，并按要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

As bike-sharing booms in China, a guideline was released by the government to promote a new form of the sharing economy - this time involving vehicles.

Car-sharing, which provides an alternative for people to travel in cities, will be the new innovation in a service model. The released guideline focuses on legal status, insurance and regular maintenance of cars before they join sharing services. It encourages the development of car-sharing, which is expected to reduce the liking to individually buy vehicles and ease traffic congestion amid a surge in recent years of private-car ownership.

“However, there is a long way to before the purpose of the guideline comes true,” said Xia Xueluan, a professor of sociology. “First, a car costs at least 100.000 yuan, almost 500 times that for a shared bicycle. Besides, shared cars also take the same spaces as other private cars, so parking will be another problem.”

“Meanwhile, traditional car rental companies are competing with the emerging car-sharing business. It’s estimated the charges will be almost the same for both forms of cars rentals,” Xia said. “How to survive fierce competition will remain a challenge for car-sharing providers,” he added.

（寫作內(nèi)容）

1. 用約30個(gè)詞概括上述文章的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 請(qǐng)你就共享汽車的話題發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)。

(1) 為什么要發(fā)展共享汽車；

(2) 如何才能更好地發(fā)展共享汽車。

（寫作要求）

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句:

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱:

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

（評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】This report is mainly about a guideline for the promotion of car-sharing, which shows government’s will to reduce traffic congestion. Meanwhile, some difficulties are also put forward as a reminder.

Despite the current problems like parking difficulties and economic factors, personally I believe the benefits car-sharing brings obviously outweigh those defects. To the society, congestion together with pollution can be remarkably eased with less private cars. To individuals, apart from the saved money, the convenience of getting around without being stuck to the same car is also a cool thing.

For a healthy car-sharing development, the most important is to make sure everyone obeys the rule when using shared cars. Parking won’t be a headache when users return cars in order. As for the survival of the new industry, government can subsidize those submitting to the guidelines. When good examples are followed and vicious competition is prohibited, problems will be solved.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是讀寫任務(wù)，要求寫一個(gè)30詞的概要并就共享汽車的話題發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求用約30詞寫一個(gè)概要，并就共享汽車的話題發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)：(1) 為什么要發(fā)展共享汽車；(2) 如何才能更好地發(fā)展共享汽車。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：car-sharing（共享汽車），promotion（振興），traffic congestion（交通堵塞），ease（減輕），parking（泊車），economic（經(jīng)濟(jì)上的），benefit（益處），outweigh（超過），defect（缺點(diǎn)），prohibit（禁止）及remarkably（顯著地）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意該要的詞數(shù)要求、主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。

本文內(nèi)容完整，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。