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5．假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，為了推廣中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化，學(xué)生會(huì)將舉辦一年一度的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，本年度的主題為"My Favourite Traditional Chinese Festival"，請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Carlie寫(xiě)一封郵件，郵件的內(nèi)容包括：
1．說(shuō)明你打算參加比賽及原因；
2．比賽的相關(guān)內(nèi)容（例如：時(shí)間、主題等）；
3．希望她給予你相關(guān)的指導(dǎo)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Carlie，
How is everything going？I am much honored to inform you of the thrilling news that I am going to participate in the annaual English speech contest，the theme of which is"My Favourit Traditional Chinese Fsetical"．（高分句型一）
As scheduled，the contest is to be held on June 30th，2017．As we know，it is of great necessity to attach great importance to our culture．Therefore，not only will this activity provide us with the chance to improve our speaking skills，but it will also promote our passion for out traditional culture．（高分句型二）
But now I still have some difficulty in using proper English to express my thoughts．I would appreciate it if you could share your valued opinion concerning it．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours
Li hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息為了推廣中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化，學(xué)生會(huì)將舉辦一年一度的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，本年度的主題為"My Favourite Traditional Chinese Festival"，請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Carlie寫(xiě)一封郵件．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：說(shuō)明你打算參加比賽及原因；比賽的相關(guān)內(nèi)容（例如：時(shí)間、主題等）；希望她給予你相關(guān)的指導(dǎo)． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：inform sb of sth告知某人某事；As we know眾所周知；Therefore因此；not only，but（also）不僅，而且；Look forward to盼望；
I am much honored to inform you of the thrilling news that I am going to participate in the annaual English speech contest，the theme of which is"My Favourit Traditional Chinese Fsetical"．（高分句型一）
Therefore，not only will this activity provide us with the chance to improve our speaking skills，but it will also promote our passion for out traditional culture．（高分句型二）
I would appreciate it if you could share your valued opinion concerning it．（高分句型三）（

解答 Dear Carlie，
       How is everything going？I am much honored to inform you of the thrilling news that I am going to participate in the annaual English speech contest，the theme of which is"My Favourit Traditional Chinese Fsetical"．（高分句型一）
       As scheduled，the contest is to be held on June 30th，2017．As we know，it is of great necessity to attach great importance to our culture．Therefore，not only will this activity provide us with the chance to improve our speaking skills，but it will also promote our passion for out traditional culture．（高分句型二）
       But now I still have some difficulty in using proper English to express my thoughts．I would appreciate it if you could share your valued opinion concerning it．（高分句型三）
       Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．