Question

12．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班學(xué)生李華．上周六你和同學(xué)騎共享單車去購(gòu)書時(shí)看到某些不文明現(xiàn)象．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，以"Our Meaningful Work"為題，給校刊"英語(yǔ)角"寫一篇英文稿件，介紹事情的整個(gè)過(guò)程．
注意：詞數(shù)不少于60．
提示詞：共享單車 shared bicycle

Our Meaningful Work
Last Saturday my classmates and I did some meaningful work as we went to buy books．
That afternoon we rode shared bicycles to Beijing Book Building as planned．Everyone was excited，enjoying the convenience brought about by the shared bicycles．However，something unexpected happened on arrival．We noticed the shared bicycles parked here and there，blocking the way of the passersby．One of my classmates proposed placing them in order，so we got down to work immediately．It took us about twenty minutes to finish the work．Seeing the tidily arranged bicycles，we all felt delighted．We also received high praise for what we had done．
The experience caused my concern about shared bicycles．I think we should put them in place after using them，which not only brings us neat and tidy environment，but also reflects qualities of a good citizen．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇看圖寫作．寫作要點(diǎn)暗含在所給四幅圖畫中，只需描述四幅畫所含信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)表些自己的見解即可．注意文章使用的時(shí)態(tài)，看圖寫作多使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)．寫作過(guò)程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語(yǔ)和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性．
（高級(jí)句型一）Everyone was excited，enjoying the convenience brought about by the shared bicycles．
enjoying…是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)，表示伴隨狀況；
（高級(jí)句型二）We noticed the shared bicycles parked here and there，blocking the way of the passersby．
該句式notice+賓語(yǔ)+過(guò)去分詞；blocking…現(xiàn)在分詞表示結(jié)果；
（高級(jí)句型三）I think we should put them in place after using them，which not only brings us neat and tidy environment，but also reflects qualities of a good citizen．
which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，指前面整個(gè)事情；
高級(jí)詞匯：unexpected意料之外；propose建議； got down to 開始做；It took us about twenty minutes to 做某事花了多少時(shí)間；not only…but also 不僅而且

解答 Our Meaningful Work
   Last Saturday my classmates and I did some meaningful work as we went to buy books．
   That afternoon we rode shared bicycles to Beijing Book Building as planned．（高級(jí)句型一）Everyone was excited，enjoying the convenience brought about by the shared bicycles．However，something unexpected happened on arrival．（高級(jí)句型二）We noticed the shared bicycles parked here and there，blocking the way of the passersby．One of my classmates proposed placing them in order，so we got down to work immediately．It took us about twenty minutes to finish the work．Seeing the tidily arranged bicycles，we all felt delighted．We also received high praise for what we had done．
   The experience caused my concern about shared bicycles．（高級(jí)句型三）I think we should put them in place after using them，which not only brings us neat and tidy environment，but also reflects qualities of a good citizen．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是圖畫類寫作，考生在寫作前應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察所給圖畫，再運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確的、合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)合實(shí)際將圖片內(nèi)容描述清楚．寫作過(guò)程中切忌偏離主題，盡量做到圖文搭配．