【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文，文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Our school encouraged is to experience some future careers last vacation. Some students choose to work as either cashiers in a store and waiters at a restaurant. I was one of the 500 student to join in the activity. I decided be an assistant in a photo studio because of I love taking photos. With the help of a advanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination in my daily work. I also developed practically skills which are necessary for them to face future challenges. The most important thing I’ve learned are to improve myself after I get my dream job.

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本文屬于記敘文，講述作者參與學(xué)校的一份職業(yè)體驗(yàn)經(jīng)歷，讓作者學(xué)到了很多東西。

第一處：考查一般過去時(shí)。句意：一些同學(xué)選擇當(dāng)超市里的收銀員，或者餐廳服務(wù)員。根據(jù)文章可知，作者陳述過去的事情，故用一般過去時(shí)，故把choose改為chose。

第二處：考查并列連詞。句意：一些同學(xué)選擇當(dāng)超市里的收銀員，或者餐廳服務(wù)員。本句為結(jié)構(gòu)either…or或者…或者，故把and改為or。

第三處：考查名詞。句意：我是參加活動(dòng)的500個(gè)學(xué)生之一。one of后接可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故把student改為students。

第四處：考查動(dòng)詞不定式。句意：我覺得成為一家照相館的助理，因?yàn)槲蚁矚g拍照。本句為decide的用法decide to do sth決定做某事，故在decided 后加to。

第五處：考查狀語從句。句意：我覺得成為一家照相館的助理，因?yàn)槲蚁矚g拍照。分析句子可知，本句為原因狀語從句，故用because，而because of后接短語，故去掉of。

第六處：考查冠詞。句意：在一個(gè)高級(jí)攝影師的幫助下，我開始日常工作的打開我的想象。advanced photographer為可數(shù)名詞，advanced為元音發(fā)音開頭，故用an，故把a改為an。

第七處：考查形容詞。句意：我也培養(yǎng)了一些實(shí)用的技能，這些技能對(duì)我未來面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)來說很有必要。修飾名詞用形容詞，故把practically改為practical。

第八處：考查代詞。句意：我也培養(yǎng)了一些實(shí)用的技能，這些技能對(duì)我未來面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)來說很有必要。分析句子可知，本句闡述這份工作對(duì)作者本人的意義，故用me，故把them改為me。

第九處：考查主謂一致。句意：我學(xué)到的最重要的事情就是在得到夢(mèng)想工作之前要提升自己。分析句子可知，本句主語為the most important thing，為單數(shù)形式，故謂語用第三人稱單數(shù)，故把are改為is。

第十處：考查連詞。句意：我學(xué)到的最重要的事情就是在得到夢(mèng)想工作之前要提升自己。分析句子可知，after I get my dream job為時(shí)間狀語從句，作者還沒有得到夢(mèng)想工作，但是需要提升自己，故把after改為before，也可以用until。

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