Question

【題目】食物浪費(fèi)是全世界一個(gè)嚴(yán)肅的問題。為此，開始于去年1月的光盤行動(dòng)在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上呼吁人們減少食物浪費(fèi)。下面請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提供的材料，以 “How to reduce food waste”為題，寫一篇80詞的短文，并提出你的看法或者建議。

1．在餐館不要點(diǎn)太多的食物；

2．如果你不能吃完所點(diǎn)的食物，那就把剩余的帶回家；

3．對(duì)食物不要太挑剔，一些食物也許嘗起來不怎么，但你的身體需要；

4．留意家里的食物，不要買的太多，特別是蔬菜和水果；

注意：1．文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，保持連貫；

3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校。

參考詞匯：reduce減少； rest 剩余的； picky 挑剔的; keep an eye on 注意、留意。

How to reduce food waste

Wasting food is a serious problem around the world. The Clean Your Plate Campaign began on the Internet in January last year. It calls on people to reduce food waste. So we must do the following.

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to reduce food waste

Wasting food is a serious problem around the world. The Clean Your Plate Campaign began on the Internet in January. It calls on people to reduce food waste. So we must do the following.

Do not order too much in a restaurant. Only order as much as you want to eat. If you cannot eat all the food you ordered, take the rest of it home. Don’t be too picky about food. Some food may not taste great, but your body needs it. Keep an eye on what food you have at home. Don’t buy too much, especially vegetables and fruit. To reduce food waste is a big task, and it needs time. It’s important that everyone must save food and reduce food waste from now on.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇議論文，針對(duì)開始于去年1月的光盤行動(dòng)提出自己的看法和建議。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2.題目已經(jīng)給出相關(guān)要點(diǎn)和詞匯，要在題目要求的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行合理分析、構(gòu)思和想象。3.遵循一定的邏輯關(guān)系，條理清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，上下文連貫，語言得體。4.根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 5.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如Do not order too much in a restaurant. Only order as much as you want to eat.多用短句，使文章條理清晰，簡(jiǎn)潔明了；It’s important that everyone must save food and reduce food waste from now on.強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，突出重點(diǎn)，一目了然；If you cannot eat all the food you ordered, take the rest of it home.多用祈使句型，語氣委婉；Do not order too much in a restaurant.；Don’t be too picky about food.；Don’t buy too much, especially vegetables and fruit.三個(gè)do not 句子分開層次，使文章層次清楚。