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【題目】假如你是李華，是一名高中生。隨著科技的發(fā)展，iPad已成為中學(xué)生的新寵。用iPad既可以聽音樂，閱讀純文本電子書，又可玩電子游戲。請你用英語給某英語報社寫一封信，談?wù)勚袑W(xué)生使用iPad的情況。信的內(nèi)容必須包括以下幾點：

1、使用iPad對學(xué)習(xí)的好處：

2、對課堂紀(jì)律和學(xué)習(xí)可能產(chǎn)生的負(fù)面影響：

3、提出自己的建議并說明理由。

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Dear Editor',

I'm a senior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and think it's a fashion to use them.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I'm a senior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and think it's a fashion to use them. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparently, it's helpful to our study, especially to our English listening.

Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. Some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.

In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success. The classroom is a place for students to study, and therefore concentration is awfully needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。文章內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生生活，比較好寫。文章應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱。所給作文范文中，長短句結(jié)合，條理清楚。充分利用了非謂語動詞（using an iPad），定語從句（which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed）等高級句式。apparently，waste time doing ，make use of，academic，awfully，furthermore等詞匯和短語的使用為文章增色不少。