Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國筆友Johnson是個中國迷。他最近看了幾部中國電影，但感覺似懂非懂，因此寫信向你尋求一些建議。請你給他寫一封回信，要點如下：

1. 表示理解；

2. 分析原因(文化背景知識不足，臺詞翻譯不精準等）；

3. 提出建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Johnson，

I have received your letter of Nov. 5th.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Johnson,

I have received your letter of Nov. 5 th. You mentioned that you couldn’t make good sense of Chinese films. Don’t be upset about that, as it is not rare for foreigners to have such problems.

There are many reasons for it. A lack of cultural background knowledge may result in misunderstanding. What’s worse, the English translation of the lines may not be exact enough to convey their original meanings, which often confuses foreigners.

To have a better understanding of a Chinese film, before seeing it, you can make a careful study of its background through the Internet or related materials. Besides, turn to me whenever you feel puzzled. I am more than willing to give you detailed explanations.

I hope you will appreciate Chinese films better in the future.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文為提綱類作文。首先，學生要仔細閱讀提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。其次，要注意提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。最后，要根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習慣。本文是一封信，按照內(nèi)容要求可以確定文章的框架結構，三段式，第一部分表達你對他的疑問表示理解，寒暄；第二部分是本文的主體，用給出的提示詳細寫明原因，不要逐字翻譯，要充實內(nèi)容，具體化；第三部分，也是很重要的部分，要給出你的有建設性的建議，最后要有祝福，要注意信件格式。

【亮點說明】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結構嚴謹，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時運用高級句子。賓語從句的使用：You mentioned that you couldn’t make good sense of Chinese films.祈使句的使用：Don’t be upset about that,非限制性定語從句的使用：……, which often confuses foreigners.連接詞的使用也很不錯：What’s worse, Besides。