Question

【題目】假如你是李華，作為高一新生，你要在主題班會(huì)上做自我介紹，內(nèi)容需要包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1.姓名、年齡；

2.家庭情況；

3.業(yè)余愛(ài)好；

4.想和同學(xué)們交朋友。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不記入總詞數(shù)。

Hello, everyone! It’s a great honor to be here to introduce myself to you.

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Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everyone! It’s a great honor to be here to introduce myself to you.

My name is Li Hua. I’m sixteen years old. There are three people in my family, and just like most of you, I’m the only child, which is very common in Chinese families. My father works in a hospital and my mother is a teacher in a senior school. We love each other dearly.

Besides my courses, I have various hobbies, such as reading, drawing and swimming. In my spare time, I have also collected a lot of stamps, which are very precious now because we seldom post a letter nowadays.

In a word, I’m pleased to be one of you and I sincerely hope that we can become good friends in our daily life.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇自我介紹的文章。作為高一新生，你要在主題班會(huì)上做自我介紹，內(nèi)容需要包括以下要點(diǎn)：姓名、年齡；家庭情況；業(yè)余愛(ài)好；想和同學(xué)們交朋友。根據(jù)所給提綱，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文內(nèi)容齊全，重點(diǎn)突出，語(yǔ)言樸實(shí)，語(yǔ)句嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，句中使用高級(jí)句子。I’m the only child, which is very common in Chinese families. which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；I have also collected a lot of stamps, which are very precious now because we seldom post a letter nowadays.which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句和because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句完美結(jié)合；另外，Besides my courses, In my spare time,In a word,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。