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【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一封稿件，介紹你班上周五下午參加學(xué)校組織的“安全教育——消防演習(xí)”活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：消防演習(xí)fire drill 滅火器 fire extinguisher

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Answer 1

【答案】To promote the awareness of fire safety, our school conducted a fire drill last Friday afternoon.

Before the drill, a firefighter officer gave us a lecture on the danger of fire, the importance of fire prevention, and the ways of self-rescue. We all listened attentively and took notes.

Shortly afterwards, a fire drill began. Hearing the alarm, we lined up and walked out of the classroom at a fast pace. Approaching the staircase, we found ourselves surrounded by heavy smoke. We panicked at first, but soon calmed down. As instructed, we covered our mouths and noses with wet towels, stayed low beneath the smoke and orderly descended the stairs following the escape route. We all safely arrived at the playground and cheered for surviving the big fire.

After a short break, firefighters showed us how to use the fire extinguishers properly and using their instructions, we put out fires successfully.

Back in our classroom, we excitedly held a meeting sharing our ideas and feelings. We realized that when faced with danger, you should stay calm. Having knowledge of safety procedures can increase your chances of survival.(186 words)

【解析】試題分析：本文考查看圖作文。 圖畫(huà)類書(shū)面表達(dá)提供的畫(huà)面通常只能展現(xiàn)事物發(fā)展的一個(gè)或幾個(gè)片段，因此要根據(jù)畫(huà)面進(jìn)行合理的聯(lián)想，把畫(huà)面中沒(méi)有明確顯示的內(nèi)容盡可能合情合理地通過(guò)增添相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)表達(dá)出來(lái)。細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)要要點(diǎn)齊全、主次分明、詳略得當(dāng)。本文要求考試講述一次活“安全教育——消防演習(xí)”活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程。首先要根據(jù)圖畫(huà)確定要點(diǎn)，切記要點(diǎn)應(yīng)是圖畫(huà)最重要最直觀的信息，其次，要增添合情合理的細(xì)節(jié)，最后連圖成篇，一定要做到邏輯合理，上下連貫，用關(guān)聯(lián)詞進(jìn)行上下文的銜接。