短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：把缺詞處加個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible members of society. I can well remember an incident that happens on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl about ten was knocked on by a passing car, it drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to a girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured but we sent her to the nearest hospital. Comparing with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

As a member of the society, I am convinced of that being responsible is that it takes to make a better society.

假定你是李華，在校報看到了一則招聘啟事，請閱讀啟事，并根據(jù)寫作要點寫一封應(yīng)聘郵件。

寫作要點：1. 表明寫信意圖；2. 陳述應(yīng)聘目的；3. 說明應(yīng)聘條件（英語好、能熟練操作電腦、有奉獻精神和服務(wù)意識等）。

要求：內(nèi)容向上，語意連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)完整,書寫工整，字數(shù)100左右。

Dear Ms. Chen,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 21, Grade 2. _______________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

She brought with her three friends, none of ________ I had ever met before.

A. themB. whoC. whomD. these

He gave us a lot of help when we were in trouble, but we have nothing to give him ________.

A. in dangerC. in needC. in returnD. in fact

The thought of going back home was ________ kept him happy while he was working abroad.

A．thatB．a(chǎn)ll thatC．a(chǎn)ll whatD．which

Even though we have made much progress in preventing pollution, yet much ________.

A. is remained to doB. remains being done

C. remains to be doneD. is remained to be done

Eric received training in computer for one year, ________ he found a job in a big company.

A. after thatB. after whichC. after itD. after this

The year 1949 ________ the birth of a new country — the People’s Republic of China.

A. happenedB. gaveC. hadD. saw

To get evidence of the murder, the police ________ the whole house ________.

A. made, search forB. had, searched

C. made, searched forD. had, searching

We went through a period ________ communications were very difficult in the rural areas.

A. whichB. whoseC. in whichD. with which