假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Every high school student wants to get into famous universities and they spend most of their time review lessons. Nowadays, many graduates find hard to be admitted to famous universities. To be honest, only the small number of students can get so golden chances. Therefore, I have a strong desire to enter for Beijing University to study. To make my dream come true, I have to know my advantage and weaknesses. Besides, I must work hard or put all my time and energy into study. Most important, I must arrange my time properly. I was approaching my dream university with every effort.

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I can clear remember the incident that was happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing while a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car. The car drove off quickly, and a man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid. I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to nearest hospital.

My experience show that it is not difficult to be a responsible member of the societies. Comparing with the escaped driver, I am proud of how I did.

【1】Li Fang was not going to hold his breath for Hu Jin to apologize, and he would drown his ________ in coffee.

【2】Well, I can’t say that I have any plans, and, as a matter of fact, I landed in Brain ________.

【3】Around noon they arrived in Toronto, thc biggest and most ________ city in Canada.

【4】Indeed, he believes that a person with too much money has more rather than fewer troubles, and he ________ gives millions of yuan to equip others for their research in agriculture.

【5】Julia stepped back appearing surprised and put up her hands, as if in ________.

【6】Perhaps we ought to ________ our ideas and provide a balanced menu with food full of energy and fibre.

【7】Although its origin may still be a puzzle, the moon can never be anything more than a ________ of the earth.

【8】Jane Goodall has studied these families of chimps for many years and helped people understand how much they ________ like humans.

【9】Unfortunately his father died, leaving the family even ________, so Charlie spent his childhood looking after his sick mother and his brother.

【10】There are ________ kinds of theme parks, with a different park for almost everything: food, culture, science, cartoons, movies or history.

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Dear Dr. Health

I am very overweight. Since people often laugh to me behind my back when I ride the underground or going for a walk, I am embarrassing and do not like going out any more. Certainly, I do not feel comfortably going to the gym to work out. Instead, I prefer to exercise at home, and it seemed that I am always going on a diet. But, no matter what I do, my efforts to lose weight always end in failure.

As a matter of the fact, my friends say that I am an attractive girl just the way I am, and that I should not worry at all about my waist or my figures. However, I do worry that my weight might damage my health. I’m not sure whether I should take weight-loss pills. There are news about a Canadian actress which suffered liver failure because of taking those pills.

What do you think I should do?

Best wishes

Guo XiLin

假段定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

A foreign student graduated with honors from a fine university in Germany. He expected to find a good job and had a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasn’t even giving the chance of an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. “We don’t employ dishonest people in Germany”is the answer. What was go wrong? Short after he arrived in Germany, he found easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and was caught three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all keep in minds：honesty is the best policy.

【1】To be honesty, the job is quite interesting.

【2】It is unwise to rely him too much.

【3】They are in search for a tiger.

【4】Look! A frog is swallowed by a snake over there.

【5】We all agree that Mount Tai is worth visit.

【6】There are many stars in the sky, that are shining and beautiful.

【7】The book is belonged to Lily.

【8】He is in the charge of the company while I’m away.

【9】It was in this room where he was born in 2002.

【10】There is not doubt that the box was thrown away.

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏子符號(hào)（∧)，并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞：

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I had a interesting dream last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn’t lose heart and kept running. All the students on the playground cheer me on," Come on!” I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if flying like a superman. In the end, I get to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!

The Street Store works closely with local council to get permission to pop-up their sidewalk shops in poor areas around Cape Town. Because of the social conditions in South Africa, over half of the children live in poverty, making the Street Store even more popular.

The Street Store displays a row of cardboard “hangers” (衣架), with boxes neatly arranged below each one. On the hangers hang shirts, T-shirts, trousers and dresses donated by the Cape Town public. In the boxes below, multiple pairs of shoes await a new owner. Street Store volunteers also act as store consultants, offering fashion advice to their customers as they try on chosen donated items.

The Street Store has already reached thousands in the Cape Town area, with over 1,000 satisfied homeless customers visiting on their first day in operation. The program gives the homeless not only a change to pick up some needed clothing, but also restores confidence by giving them a retail experience—even when pocket money doesn’t allow it.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1. 用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2.span> 結(jié)合上述信息，談?wù)勀銓?duì)the Street Store的看法；

3. 假設(shè)你是the Street Store活動(dòng)的參與者，你會(huì)怎么做？（不少于兩點(diǎn)）

【寫作要求】

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I have recently been told that listen to loud music is gradually making people hard of hearing. I'm sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she had turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gives a party she doesn’t have to invite a rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered certain electronic sounds have strangely effects on rats. He declares break down, almost paralyze(癱) with their legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wonder that the same thing will happen to my neighbor someday.

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I am more than glad to tell you about my trip in Xi’an, a capital city of Shaanxi Province.

What impresses me deep is its natural scenery and long history. First, as it is known to the world, Xi’an has a long history and is the birthplace of Chinese civilization. Its cultural and historical significance of the area, as well as many historical sites, help Xi’an enjoy the title of “Natural History Museum”. The Terracotta Warriors, as example, are praised as “the eight wonder of the world”. Second, it is in a favorable geographical location surrounding by the Wei River and Qinling. I have also climbed Mount Hua, one of the five most famous mountains in China, what is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and unique characteristics.

It is really worthy visiting, and I’m looking forward to your coming.