Question

10．假設(shè)你叫劉京，是美國中學(xué)生托尼的筆友，你收到了他的來信．請給托尼寫一封回信，回答他的問題，介紹北京良好的公交服務(wù)，并談?wù)勀愕母惺埽?br />

Hi!Liu Jing， My grandpa is going to Beijing next month because he ahs heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it himself．He says the bus service in Beijing is very good now，and people can to anywhere by bus．Is he right？Can you tell me something more about it？ I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon． Yours， Tony

Hi!Tony， I'm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing．Your grandpa is right．The bus service in Beijing is really good now．There are bus lines all over Beijing and buses can even take you to a small village．Besides，special seats are offered on buses．People do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap． I like taking a bus because I think it's comfortable and also good for the environment．So it's a good choice for your grandpa to travel in Beijing． If you have more questions，please ask me． If you have more questions，please ask me． Yours， Liu Jing

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是給托尼寫一封回信，回答他的問題，介紹北京良好的公交服務(wù)，并談?wù)勀愕母惺埽畷r態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．回答Tony的問題
2．介紹北京良好的公交服務(wù)
3．談?wù)勀愕母惺?br />常用到的重點短語：
there be 有
besides 另外
spend 時間 doing sth花時間做某事
be good for對…有益
offer提供
高分句型：
1．①Besides，special seats②are offered on buses．
①besides另外，引出下文．
②被動語態(tài)的運用，意在突出主語．

2．So it's a good choice for your grandpa to travel in Beijing
it作為形式主語，后面的to travel in Beijing動詞不定式做真正主語．

解答 Dear Tony，
     I'm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing．
     Your grandpa is right．The bus service in Beijing is really good now．（回答Tony的問題）There are bus lines all over Beijing and buses can even take you to a small village．Besides，special seats are offered on buses（高分句型）．People do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap．（介紹北京良好的公交服務(wù)）
      I like taking a bus because I think it's comfortable and also good for the environment．So it's a good choice for your grandpa to travel in Beijing．（我的感受）（高分句型）
      If you have more questions，please ask me．
     Yours，
     Liu Jing

點評 本文是一篇給材料作文，短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出．寫作時先要圍繞這些要點組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點全部表達出來，并且要有適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點時，要結(jié)合活動內(nèi)容，寫出自己的觀點．