Question

5．假如你是育英中學(xué)的劉琳，在網(wǎng)上看到一美國(guó)中學(xué)生Anna想結(jié)交中國(guó)朋友的 帖子，請(qǐng)你給她回帖，表示愿意成為她的朋友．
內(nèi)容包括介紹自己．（不超過(guò)三項(xiàng)）
1．為什么想和她成為朋友．
要求寫(xiě)作中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)．
2．語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范．
3．文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
4．詞數(shù)：60〜80詞．
Hi Anna，
I'm Liu Lin
I'm a student of Yuying Middle School in China．I'm kind of outgoing and good at swimming．I'd like to be your friend．Because of the same age，I think we can learn well from each other and help each other．It's also a good way for us to talk both in English and Chinese，right？And I think we can know a lot about your and my country and people．Is that what you expect？
Best wishes！
Yours，
Liu Lin．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是給Anna回帖，表示愿意成為她的朋友．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1介紹自己
2為什么想和她成為朋友
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
kind of 一點(diǎn)兒
be good at 擅長(zhǎng)…
because of 因?yàn)椤?br />learn from sb 向某人學(xué)習(xí)
each other彼此
both …and…兩者都…
高分句型：
1．①Because of the same age，I think ②we can learn well from each other and help each other．
①because of表示因?yàn)椤�，of是介詞，后加名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞．
②省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句，作為think的賓語(yǔ)．
2．①I(mǎi)t's also a good way for us to talk ②both in English and Chinese，③right？
①it作為形式主語(yǔ)，后面的動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語(yǔ)．
②both …and…兩者都…連接名詞或代詞作主語(yǔ)時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)形式，不受‘就近原則'的限制．如，Both Li Ming and Wei Hua are good at English．
③right？對(duì)吧？加上問(wèn)號(hào)表示反問(wèn)．

解答 Hi Anna，
I'm Liu Lin．I'm a student of Yuying Middle School in China．I'm kind of outgoing and good at swimming．（高分句型）（介紹自己）I'd like to be your friend．Because of the same age，I think we can learn well from each other and help each other．（高分句型）It's also a good way for us to talk both in English and Chinese，right？（高分句型）And I think we can know a lot about your and my country and people．（為什么）Is that what you expect？Best wishes!
Yours，Liu Lin

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無(wú)把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫(xiě)句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣