Question

俗話(huà)說(shuō)：“予人玫瑰，手留余香”。在我們的日常生活中，我們會(huì)遇到各種困難，因此，我們會(huì)需要他人的幫助；但同時(shí)，我們也要學(xué)會(huì)幫助他人。其實(shí)，幫助他人就是在幫助自己。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合身邊的事例，以“幫助”為話(huà)題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。注意：①無(wú)需寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；②文中要結(jié)合你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；③文中不得透露任何個(gè)人和學(xué)校的真實(shí)信息；④詞數(shù)為80左右。
As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble.

Answer 1

So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.
I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Junior Eight. Li Hua, one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, I found my English improved too.
Actually, helping others is helping ourselves.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于互相幫助的短文。本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式.結(jié)合所談話(huà)題,可知本文寫(xiě)成記述文比較容易下手.寫(xiě)作中注意應(yīng)用具體事例來(lái)說(shuō)明相互幫助的意思.寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。