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7．假如你是李華，準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校舉辦的主題為"健康成長(zhǎng)"的英語(yǔ)演講比賽．請(qǐng)按要
求寫(xiě)一篇短文，主要內(nèi)容包括：1．保持快樂(lè)的心情；2．努力學(xué)習(xí)；3．積極參加體育鍛 煉．
注意：1）詞數(shù)  80 詞左右；
2）可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3）文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear friends，we all want to grow up happily and healthily，So we have to do some things．
First，we should keep ourselves happy．Life is not always full of sunshine．When we are in trouble，we should be brave enough to deal with problems．Next，we must study hard because knowledge is power．The more knowledge we have，the more confident we will be．Finally，
In order to study well，we need to do sports so that we can keep fit．We can go running，play ball games or simply take a walk after a day's study．If we do those things well，we will be able to grow up happily and healthily．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容為以健康成長(zhǎng)為題寫(xiě)一篇演講稿．時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．其次考生可從三方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．保持快樂(lè)的心情；2．努力學(xué)習(xí)；3．積極參加體育鍛煉．
常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)：
firstly，next，finally首先…接下來(lái)…最后…
it's adj to do…做某事是…
be full of 充滿了
deal with處理
knowledge is power知識(shí)就是力量
in order to為了…
keep fit保持健康
參考句子：
When we are in trouble，we should be brave enough to deal with problems．
句中when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，以及adj+enough to do sth表示足夠怎么樣去做某事．
The more knowledge we have，the more confident we will be．
句中的the+比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)表示越來(lái)越…
Finally，In order to study well，we need to do sports so that we can keep fit．
句中的in order to do sth作為目的狀語(yǔ)，so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句．
If we do those things well，we will be able to grow up happily and healthily．
if句中表示如果，引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主將從現(xiàn)．

解答 Dear friends，we all want to grow up happily and healthily，So we have to do some things．
First，we should keep ourselves happy．Life is not always full of sunshine．When we are in trouble，we should be brave enough to deal with problems（高分句型）（保持快樂(lè)的心情）．Next，we must study hard because knowledge is power．The more knowledge we have，the more confident we will be．（努力學(xué)習(xí)）（高分句型）Finally，In order to study well，we need to do sports so that we can keep fit．（高分句型）We can go running，play ball games or simply take a walk after a day's study．（積極參加體育鍛煉．）If we do those things well，we will be able to grow up happily and healthily．（高分句型）（總結(jié)，首尾呼應(yīng)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文屬于提綱類作文，文字提示里所給要點(diǎn)不多，考生需要做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，一定要注意使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接全文如firstly，next，finally等；讓文章成為一個(gè)整體．同時(shí)注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型提升問(wèn)的文采和層次．
提綱類作文最重要的是要把所有的要點(diǎn)都包括在內(nèi)，不能有遺漏或省略．本文所給要點(diǎn)不多，需要考生做較多的發(fā)揮，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，讓文章更有文采．