Question

12．從今年三月起，全國各地都在積極開展"學(xué)雷鋒"活動(dòng)．你了解雷鋒嗎？請談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒窈蟮拇蛩悖?br />1談?wù)勀闼�了解的雷鋒．
2你將來的打算：
A．努力學(xué)習(xí)．
B．送書，幫助貧困孩子．
C．周末看望老人．
D．在家?guī)透改缸黾覄?wù)．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)60-80個(gè)左右；開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
（2）覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)；可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
        The Spirit of Lifeng
  The people all over China are learning from Leifengnow．He is the great example to all of us．He was always ready to help others and never asked for anything．So he became the spirit of Chinese people．
As a student of the 21^st century，we should learn from him and try to help others．But what should we do？First，we should study hard so that we can have more abilities to help others．Second，we could help the children．Give them books，warm clothes，raise money for charities and so on．And on weekends，we can visit old people，spend time with them and help them as much as possible．Finally，we should help our parents with housework at home．Because parents are often tired of hard work．
Lei Feng has gone，but we can be new Lei Fengs．Whenever and wherever，we can show our kindness．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容談?wù)剬?duì)學(xué)雷鋒活動(dòng)的看法．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從兩個(gè)大的方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1談?wù)勀闼�了解的雷鋒．
2你將來的打算：其中還有四小點(diǎn)
A．努力學(xué)習(xí)．
B．送書，幫助貧困孩子．
C．周末看望老人．
D．在家?guī)透改缸黾覄?wù)．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
learn from sb向誰學(xué)習(xí)．
be ready to do sth準(zhǔn)備好做某事
try to do sth盡力做某事
and so on等等
spend 時(shí)間with sb和某人一起度過
as…as possible盡可能的…
help sb with sth幫助某人做某事
高分句型：
First，we should study hard so that we can have more abilities to help others．
本句中的so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句．并且 to help others動(dòng)詞不定式作為后置定語．
Whenever and wherever，we can show our kindness．
句中Whenever and wherever表示無論何時(shí)何地，做句子的狀語．

解答 The Spirit of Lei Feng
The people all over China are learning from Lei Feng now．He is the great example to all of us．He was always ready to help others and never asked for anything．So he became the spirit of Chinese people．（我所了解的雷鋒）
As a student of the 21^st century，we should learn from him and try to help others．But what should we do？First，we should study hard so that we can have more abilities to help others．（高分句型）（努力學(xué)習(xí)）Second，we could help the children．Give them books，warm clothes，raise money for charities and so on（送書，幫助貧困孩子．）．And on weekends，we can visit old people，spend time with them and help them as much as possible（周末看望老人）．Finally，we should help our parents with housework at home．Because parents are often tired of hard work．（在家?guī)透改缸黾覄?wù)）
Lei Feng has gone，but we can be new Lei Fengs．Whenever and wherever，we can show our kindness．（高分句型）（發(fā)出號(hào)召）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．