Question

生活中總免不了會出些意外。作為一名中學生，除了平時要做有心人，盡量防止意外的發(fā)生，也應當掌握一些處理意外的知識。當意外突然發(fā)生時，該如何處理呢？請你根據(jù)下面提供的要點，給校報英語專欄寫一篇80詞左右的短文，并談談自己的看法。
1. 了解一些緊急救護的電話和方法
2. 當發(fā)生意外時，及時拔打緊急救護電話。
3. 清楚告訴對方發(fā)生的事情和地點
4. 保持冷靜，等待救援。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2. 應覆蓋所有要點：可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3. 參考詞匯：emergency services緊急救護  operator（接線員）
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Answer 1

There are always some accidents in our life. So it’s very important to know what to do when accidents happen. First ,we need to know the number of the emergency services,such as 120,119 and 122 and some ways to protect ourselves. When an accident happens,and we can’t deal with it,we should call the numbers of the emergency services for help in time. We should tell the operator clearly what happens,where the place is and which service we need. Then we should keep calm and wait for help. We should try our best to help people in trouble when we see an accident.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者寫當發(fā)生意外時，應該怎么樣。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如such as,deal with,for help,in time,wait for,keep calm,try our best,in trouble 等短語，文中還用到了時間狀語從句when accidents happen，when we see an accident.賓語從句  We should tell the operator clearly……；不定式做賓語what to do；固定句型it’s very important to know；定語從句we need.文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。