Question

假設(shè)你是張明，即將初中畢業(yè)。你的美國(guó)好友Jack發(fā)來(lái)e-mail詢(xún)問(wèn)你的暑假計(jì)劃。請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)一封e-mail，告訴他你的假期計(jì)劃。
注意：
1．至少要寫(xiě)出你在假期打算做的三件事；
2．回信字?jǐn)?shù)要求不少于80詞。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；
4. 所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供參考。
參考詞匯：
Summer vacation, relax oneself, visit, travel , read, volunteer, housework, play sports

Answer 1

Hi, Jack, the summer vacation is coming soon .I want to have a relaxing summer vacation. I feel tired this term so I want to relax myself. First, I will visit Beijing with my parents. We will go there by train .Second， I want to read some English books. Our teacher tells us about some famous English books. I want to read them .Third, I am going to be a volunteer .I want to do things for others .Fourth, I will also stay at home to help mother do some housework, and do some sports.
 How will you spend your holiday?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Ming

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。題中已經(jīng)給出了相關(guān)的信息和要求，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可充分使用參考詞匯。注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，因?yàn)槭菍?duì)將來(lái)的打算，所以可采用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)尤其注意主謂和時(shí)態(tài)的正確�？蛇m當(dāng)使用一些連詞來(lái)增加文章的邏輯性，使文章更通順流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)分析】這篇短文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流暢。文章使用了很多實(shí)用的表達(dá)方式，例如:文章使用了一些序列first， second，third，fourth，使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)非常清楚；want to do sth.想做某事；tell sb. about sth,告訴某人某事； 文中也使用了一般將來(lái)時(shí)的表達(dá)，如will， be going to等。