Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格的資料，用第一人稱寫(xiě)一段話，介紹你自己，所給材料必須全都用上。50詞左右，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和班級(jí)。

Name	Jim Green
Age （年齡）	9
Class	Class 1, Grade 7
Family members	Father: Jack  Mother: Kate
Favorite colors	Black and white
Favorite sport	Ping-pong ball
Telephone number	2685631

Answer 1

Myself
My name’s Jim Green. My first name is Jim, and my last name is Green, I’m 9 years old. I’ m a student. I’m in Class 1, Grade 7. There are 3 members in my family: my parents and I. My father is Jack, and my mother is Kate. They are teachers. My favorite colors are black and white. My favorite sport is ping-pong ball. I often play it with my classmates after school. If you want to make friends with me, please call me. My telephone number is 2685631.                           

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如:first name 名字，last name姓，9 years old 9歲，my favorite colors我最喜愛(ài)的顏色，play ping-pong with my classmates 和同學(xué)一起打所乒乓球，make friends with 和……交朋友，telephone number電話號(hào)碼等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。