Question

根據(jù)下面的提示，以“希望小學(xué)”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文，詞數(shù)80詞左右。
1．中國(guó)農(nóng)村許多孩子因窮困而失學(xué)。2．好心人捐款助學(xué)，創(chuàng)辦了希望小學(xué)。3．許多希望小學(xué)條件良好，有教學(xué)樓和漂亮的操場(chǎng)。4．希望更多的人來(lái)捐助希望小學(xué)，使更多的孩子受到良好的教育。
詞匯提示：Hope Primary School希望小學(xué)  poverty貧困  contributing money捐款  teaching condition教學(xué)條件
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Answer 1

In the country of China, Many children can’t go to school because of poverty. But so many warmhearted people are helping them by contributing money. And with the money, they are building schools. Many of these schools have very good teaching conditions. In these schools you can find modern teaching buildings and a beautiful playground. The students in these schools study very hard and always do a good job. Because they all know that Hope School brought them the chance to go to school again. I hope more and more people will help the Hope School, and more and more children will be able to go to the first-class school.

試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作應(yīng)分為四個(gè)層次，首先對(duì)創(chuàng)辦希望小學(xué)的原因進(jìn)行闡述，可以根據(jù)提示中國(guó)農(nóng)村許多孩子家境貧寒來(lái)寫(xiě)原因；其次介紹很多熱心人士都慷慨地捐獻(xiàn)了他們的錢(qián)來(lái)資助創(chuàng)辦希望小學(xué)這一現(xiàn)象；再將所修建的希望小學(xué)校舍情況進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)；最后發(fā)表自己的倡議，倡議更多的人加入進(jìn)來(lái)為希望小學(xué)出一份力，說(shuō)明這樣做的意義。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】：本文不難寫(xiě)，對(duì)于作文的寫(xiě)作要注意詳略得當(dāng)，本文中可以將中國(guó)教育的現(xiàn)狀和很多人捐錢(qián)來(lái)建學(xué)校這兩點(diǎn)進(jìn)行略寫(xiě)，將校舍的美麗環(huán)境進(jìn)行詳細(xì)的描寫(xiě)；對(duì)自己所發(fā)出的的倡議及這樣做的重大意思進(jìn)行詳細(xì)的書(shū)寫(xiě)。這樣文章就顯得詳略得當(dāng)、相得益彰。同時(shí)寫(xiě)的過(guò)程中注意運(yùn)用平時(shí)經(jīng)常使用的句型，經(jīng)典的句式來(lái)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。