Question

假如你叫李敏, 你的筆友王艷邀請(qǐng)你去參加聚會(huì)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給她回信。詞數(shù)60左右。
要點(diǎn)如下：1.你很抱歉, 不能去。2.你母親病了, 醫(yī)生叫她臥床幾日, 你要照顧她。3.謝謝她寄來(lái)的漂亮的明信片,你很喜歡,將它放在書(shū)桌上。
Dear Wang Yan,
Thank you very much for inviting me to your party. _______________________________                
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Give my wishes to your family.
Yours,
Li Min

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Wang Yan,
Thank you very much for inviting me to your party. But I am very sorry I can’t come. My mother is ill. The doctor asks her to stay in bed for several days. I have to take care of my mother.
Thank you very much for sending me such a beautiful postcard. I like it very much. I am going to put it on my desk. Could I hear from you soon?
Give my best wishes to your family.
Yours,
Li Min

試題分析：
這是一篇給材料作文，李敏回信解釋不去參加聚會(huì)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I am……；I have to……；Thank you very much for……及I am going to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)對(duì)王艷家人的祝福。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭感謝王艷的邀請(qǐng)，接下來(lái)說(shuō)明不去參加聚會(huì)的理由，最后感謝王艷給她寄來(lái)的明信片。此處用了I am very sorry，stay in bed，take care of，hear from等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。