Question

現(xiàn)在的學(xué)生紛紛感到功課多，學(xué)習負擔重，壓力大，內(nèi)心煩惱，于是不少學(xué)生特別是留守孩子(left-behind children)迷上網(wǎng)絡(luò)，在網(wǎng)上打游戲(computer game)，QQ聊天，寫博客（Blog)，發(fā)微信（Wechat），交網(wǎng)友(Internet friend)，等等。由于不能把握好利弊，消耗很多時間，導(dǎo)致學(xué)習成績下滑，結(jié)果更加煩惱……。你認為怎樣放松才合適呢？請你根據(jù)提示，以Learn to relax yourself 為題寫一篇短文。
寫作要點提示：
1. 學(xué)生壓力大及其表現(xiàn)；
2. 學(xué)會放松很重要；
3. 最適合我的放松方式；
4. 我的建議。  
寫作要求：
短文的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含所提示要點，語言要流暢，意思連貫，適當增加情節(jié)；短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名及地名；短文詞數(shù)在90詞左右。                        
Learn to relax yourself
                                                                                        
                                                                                          
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
           

Answer 1

Learn to relax yourself
Now many students are under too much pressure. They always feel too tired to listen to teachers carefully in class.
It's important for students to relax. Only in this way can they study well and be healthy. Here are some different ways to relax yourself. For example, you can try sleeping enough, or you can listen to your favorite music. You can also read some books or do some sports. For me, I often hang out with my friends. 
While you are studying, don't forget to relax. You may study better after a good rest.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。題目所給要點比較具體，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第二人稱，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: under too much pressure太多的壓力之下。hang out 閑逛，They always feel too tired to listen to teachers carefully in class. 他們總是覺得太累了以致不能認真聽講。學(xué)習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.