Question

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A difficult choice I had to make.”（以“一個艱難的選擇”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）
Using the following points as a reference.（以下問題供參考）
1. Have you ever had a difficult choice to make?
2. What made it so difficult for you?
3. What was your final decision?
4. Do you think it is a right decision?

Answer 1

Our lives are the sum of all our choices. The decisions we make today, may very well play a critical role in our future tomorrow. When I was thirteen, my mother always wanted me a girl who was good at school work. However, I was keen on playing the drum a lot and didn’t like study at all, which was not allowed by her. As a result, we quarreled with each other a lot. As time passed by, I gradually found that one should be knowledgeable, no matter what he would be in the future. I decided to work hard and regarded playing the drum as my hobby. Knowledge is power, and I think the choice I’ve made must be wise one.                        

試題分析：本篇作文從題目的提示中可以看出整篇文章應(yīng)該以記敘文為主，時態(tài)上要注意選取過去時，最后自我總結(jié)部分進行議論，用一般現(xiàn)在時即可。本文在寫作時根據(jù)提示進行論述，思路會比較清晰。根據(jù)“選擇是什么”—“難以選擇的原因”+“選擇過后的自我總結(jié)”。此類記敘文在本次二模和三模的各區(qū)�？贾斜容^常見，例如“A problem I have solved”要加強對于學生行文時態(tài)轉(zhuǎn)換的注意。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。