Question

14．英國(guó)學(xué)生Mary計(jì)劃來(lái)海大留學(xué)，為了提前適應(yīng)中國(guó)環(huán)境，希望在暑假期間找一名高中生學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)及中國(guó)文化．你高考即將結(jié)束，正好有時(shí)間可以幫助她，所以決定給她寫(xiě)封E-mail．
注意：1．表達(dá)應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，表達(dá)要連貫；
3．詞數(shù)120-150．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給Mary寫(xiě)封E-mail．寫(xiě)作時(shí)以第一人稱(chēng)為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主要時(shí)態(tài)．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：so as to （以便，以至于）；adapt to （適應(yīng)）；be good at（擅長(zhǎng)于）；have difficulty in doing （作某事有困難）；show sb around （帶某人參觀）；look forward to （期待，盼望）．
高分句型：1．I've learned from the Internet①that you want to have a Chinese Senior High student teach you some Chinese as well as Learning about Chinese culture ②so as to make yourself easier to adapt to the new environment in China③before you begin to study in China．
                ①that引導(dǎo)一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句；②不定式短語(yǔ)表示目的；③before引導(dǎo)一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
                 2．Most suitably，①when you come to China，I will just have had my college entrance exam，②which will give me plenty of time to teach you Chinese．
                 ①when引導(dǎo)一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；②which引導(dǎo)一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)系代詞which指代上一句提到的事情．

解答 Dear Mary，
I've learned from the Internet that you want to have a Chinese Senior High student teach you some Chinese as well as Learning about Chinese culture so as to make yourself easier to adapt to the new  environment in China before you begin to study in China（高分句型一）．I'like to be the one to help you．Now let me introduce myself and my plan to help you．I'am Li Hua，a Senior 3 Student from a Qingdao middle school．I'am good at Chinese and English，so I think we won't have difficulty in communicating with each other in English．Most suitably，when you come to China，I will just have had my college entrance exam，which will give me plenty of time to teach you Chinese （高分句型二）．I'll  let you learn Chinese culture by showing you around my hometown and making friends with my classmates．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否覆蓋了所給要點(diǎn)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，使得上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，使文章淺顯易懂，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．