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2．假設(shè)你是我市某中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華．你校將接待來(lái)自美國(guó)康州Hands high school的學(xué)生代表團(tuán)．你受學(xué)校委托安排交流活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示草擬一份活動(dòng)安排并簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由，用E-mail的形式發(fā)給代表團(tuán)團(tuán)長(zhǎng)Ms Shelley．
1．食宿：在中國(guó)學(xué)生家里．
2．活動(dòng)：聽(tīng)課；觀看藝術(shù)表演；學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化；游覽泰山名勝古跡．
3．其他建議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)120～150；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Ms Shelley，
I am Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union．                                     
                                                                               
                                                                               
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：A students'visiting group coming from the US will pay a visit to our school on June 26 and I was appointed to take charge of arranging all the activities on that day．本句是一個(gè)由連詞and引導(dǎo)的并列句，在句子"A students'visiting group coming from the US will pay a visit to our school on June 26"中coming fron the US是現(xiàn)在分詞在句中做定語(yǔ)，被修飾詞visiting group與come之間是主謂關(guān)系．
高分句型二：Then a discussion will be held，which may cover such topics as school life，cultural differences and so on，aiming to improve mutual understanding．本句中which引導(dǎo)的是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，被修飾的先行詞為dicussion；"aiming to…"是現(xiàn)在分詞在句中做狀語(yǔ)．

解答 Dear Ms Shelley，
     I am Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School．A students'visiting group coming from the US will pay a visit to our school on June 26 and I was appointed to take charge of arranging all the activities on that day（高分句型一）．My plan about these activities is as follow．
    In the morning on your arrival，we will show you around our school and introduce our most advanced science lab to you．Then a discussion will be held，which may cover such topics as school life，cultural differences and so on，aiming to improve mutual understanding．（高分句型二）At noon，we will have a get-together in our school's dining hall．To let our guests know more about our traditional customs and culture，we will prepare dumplings and noodles as main food．In the afternoon，our guests together with some of our student representatives are going to visit the Haihe River and enjoy the beautiful scenery there．After that，you will end your visit to our school．
   What do you think of the plan？Can you give me some advice on how to make your visit to our school more interesting and impressive？
   I look forward to your reply．

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