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3．假定你是李華，你在上一封信中邀請(qǐng)Dr．Brown參加你們的畢業(yè)晚會(huì)，但你把時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)說(shuō)錯(cuò)了．請(qǐng)給Dr．Brown寫一封道歉信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．為自己的失誤道歉；
2．告知其正確的時(shí)間地點(diǎn)；
3．希望Dr．Brown能來(lái)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給Dr．Brown寫一封道歉信，對(duì)自己把邀請(qǐng)Dr．Brown參加畢業(yè)晚會(huì)的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)說(shuō)錯(cuò)了表示抱歉并告知其正確的時(shí)間地點(diǎn)．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．為自己的失誤道歉； 2．告知其正確的時(shí)間地點(diǎn)；3．希望Dr．Brown能來(lái)．
重要短語(yǔ)：make a mistake（犯錯(cuò)），invited sb to do （邀請(qǐng)某人做某事），due to sth（由于某事），apologize to sb for sth（因某事向某人道歉），inform sb of（通知某人某事），have the staff meeting （開員工會(huì)議），advise sb to do sth（建議某人做某事），on time（準(zhǔn)時(shí)），in advance（提前），more than delighted（非常高興），spare some time（抽出一些時(shí)間），look forward to （期望）．
【高分句型一】
1．I am terribly sorry for making a mistake in my last letter，which invited you to our graduation party．
此處是關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主句為"I am terribly sorry for making a mistake in my last letter"，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語(yǔ)，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．
【高分句型二】
2．The graduation party is going to be held at 7：30 p．m．on June 30^th in the school lecture hall，where we usually have the staff meeting．
此處是由關(guān)系副詞"where"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主句為"The graduation party is going to be held at 7：30 p．m．on June 30^th in the school lecture hall"，先行詞為"in the school lecture hall"．
【高分句型三】
3．All the attendants are advised to arrive a few minutes earlier so that we can start on time．
此處是由"so that+句子"引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句，意為"以便于…"．

解答 Dear Dr．Brown，
I am terribly sorry for making a mistake in my last letter，which invited you to our graduation party．【高分句型一】Due to my carelessness，I provided a wrong time and place．I'm writing to apologize for it and inform you of the correct information．
The graduation party is going to be held at 7：30 p．m．on June 30^th in the school lecture hall，where we usually have the staff meeting．【高分句型二】All the attendants are advised to arrive a few minutes earlier so that we can start on time．【高分句型三】Since you are the most popular foreign teacher in our school，your presence will be greatly honored and appreciated．（告知其正確的時(shí)間地點(diǎn)）
Would you please let me know whether you can come or not in advance？We will be more than delighted if you can spare some time from your busy schedule．
Looking forward to your early reply．（希望Dr．Brown能來(lái)）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．