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    假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10初語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。對標(biāo)有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（√）如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：

    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

    增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符合(^)，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

    修改：在錯的詞下劃—橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

    注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

          2.至允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about

her except for that she was strange. she didn’t talk many .her hair was black 

and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater ,although  in the

summer .she was ,in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed ^care what

the rest if us thought about her like the rest of my classmate ,I didn’t really

want to get closest to her . it was only when we did their chemistry project

together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did .

 

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Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about

her except for that she was strange. she didn’t talk many .her hair was black  解析：except that中不能再用for。

                                              much 解析：修飾動詞talk應(yīng)該用much，此處是副詞，many沒有此用法。

and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater ,although  in the

                  wore解析：謂語動詞用過去式，不能用過去分詞

                                     even 解析：although是連詞，不能修飾介詞短語，even可以

summer .she was ,in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed ^care what

                             attractive解析：做表語，用形容詞   to 解析：seem后用帶to的不定式

the rest if us thought about her like the rest of my classmate ,I didn’t really

                                                classmates 解析：名詞需用復(fù)數(shù)

want to get closest to her . it was only when we did their chemistry project

                                  close 解析get是連系動詞，后跟形容詞 our解析：人稱和前面一致

 together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did .

                begin  解析：時態(tài)前后不一致