Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是李華，最近你班就“中學(xué)生聽MP3”的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行了一次討論，請(qǐng)你將以下討論結(jié)果給某英文報(bào)社編輯（editor）寫信，客觀反映情況。詞數(shù)100左右。

1. 時(shí)髦；2. 聽英語(yǔ)煥發(fā)精神；3. 聽英語(yǔ)提高英語(yǔ)水平。

1. 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間、影響學(xué)習(xí)；2. 總聽對(duì)聽覺(jué)有害；3. 浪費(fèi)金錢。

1. 合理利用；2. 控制時(shí)間。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

Recently, our class had a discussion about whether middle school students should listen to MP3 player.

40% of them agree with the idea, saying that as a middle school student, it is fashionable to do so. Besides, you can relax while listening to the music. Thirdly, with the help of MP3 player, we can listen to English and improve our English level. Others, however, hold the opposite idea. Firstly, it has a bad effect on our studies as it takes time. What’s more, listening too much does harm to the hearing. Thirdly, it is a waste of money to buy an MP3 player.

In my opinion, we should make good use of an MP3 player and limit the time for listening if we do want to use it.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語(yǔ)：agree with同意；with the help of 在……幫助下；have an effect on 對(duì)……有影響；what’s more而且；in one’s opinion在某人看來(lái)；40% of them agree with the idea, saying that as a middle school student, it is fashionable to do so這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用到非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)；Thirdly, it is a waste of money to buy an MP3 player.這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用到it作形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是后面的不定式。