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【題目】近來，一些游客旅游時的不文明行為備受熱議。假設(shè)你是李華，是一名導(dǎo)游，請你就此現(xiàn)象寫一篇短文發(fā)表自己的觀點。內(nèi)容要點如下：

1.列舉不文明行為；（至少兩種)

2.指出不文明行為的影響；

3. 就如何阻止不文明行為提出建議。（至少兩條）

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；.

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 首句己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

As a tour guide, I find it so embarrassing to see some tourists behave badly while traveling.

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Answer 1

【答案】As a tour guide, I find it so embarrassing to see some tourists behave badly while traveling. They speak loudly in public places, carve characters on tourist attractions, throw rubbish, spit everywhere, and even cross the road when the traffic lights are still red. Such bad behaviors have caused damage to people’s image.

Measures should be taken to stop this. First, tourists should be strict with themselves and learn to obey social and public order, and respect local religions and customs. Besides, kindergartens and primary schools should do more to teach the kids to be responsible citizens. Last, laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places. I hope soon tourists will change their behavior and win respect for themselves.

【解析】近來，一些游客旅游時的不文明行為備受熱議。假設(shè)你是李華，是一名導(dǎo)游，請你就此現(xiàn)象寫一篇短文發(fā)表自己的觀點。內(nèi)容要點如下：1.列舉不文明行為；（至少兩種)2.指出不文明行為的影響；

本文屬于提綱作文。根據(jù)文章的提示可知，就一些游客旅游時的不文明行為備受熱議發(fā)表自己的觀點：要點有：列舉至少兩種不文明行為；指出不文明行為的影響； 就如何阻止不文明行為提出至少兩點建議。文章的要點已給出。只要安順序完成即可。時態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時，在寫作時注意使用高級詞匯有句式，以增加文章的檔次。

亮點本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點完整，層次分明。文章中使用了大量的短語如cause damage to，take measures to do…, be strict with, win respect for…等，及順序連詞,如First , … besides , … Last, … 使文章更有層次感，語言生動，句式靈活，既有主動語態(tài)又有被動語態(tài)，長句與短句并存。使用了多種句式，如狀語從句（They speak loudly in public places, carve characters … when the traffic lights are still red.）和賓語從句（I hope soon tourists will change their behavior and win respect for themselves）及非謂語作狀語：I find it so embarrassing to see some tourists behave badly while traveling。使語言形象生動，文章豐富多彩。