Question

【題目】假定你是高中生李華，有感于校園中存在的隨意涂寫和亂丟垃圾的行為，請用英文給校長寫一封信，100個詞左右。1. 說明寫信的目的。2.對這些行為提出批評。3.提出建議。

提示：隨意涂寫scribble（n.& v.）亂丟垃圾litter（n.&v.）批評 criticize(v.)

Dear Mr. Headmaster，

I am Li Hua, a student fromClass One,SeniorTwo._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Headmaster，

I am Li Hua, a student from class one, senior II. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students ： littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.

I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：試題為應(yīng)用文中的書信寫作，寫好此文，需注意三點(diǎn)：一是寫信格式要準(zhǔn)確，信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，但切要寫好信的結(jié)尾。二是要詳略得當(dāng)，本文應(yīng)重點(diǎn)寫的是有感于校園中存在的隨意涂寫和亂丟垃圾的行為。1. 說明寫信的目的。2.對這些行為提出批評。3.提出建議。三要注意適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫作時要注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一封書信，格式正確，采用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，同時句中使用高級句子。a student from class one, senior II.是同位語；I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. Whenever引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句；I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior.if引導(dǎo)賓語從句；students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.含情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)用在句中；另外，高級詞匯、短語draw your attention to，does harm to，feel ashamed，At the same time,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。