Question

18．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤．對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊的橫線上畫一個勾（∨）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個詞：把多余的詞作斜線（\）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉．
此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞．
此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．
注意：原行沒有錯的不要改．

Nearly a week passed after the girl was able to explain what happened to her．One afternoon she set out from the coast in a small boat and was caught in a storm．Towards evening，the boat struck a rock but the girl jumped into the sea．Then she swam to the shore after spend the whole night in the water．During that time she covered the distance of eight miles．Early in next morning，she saw a light ahead．She knew she was near the shore．In arriving at the shore，she struggled towards the light she had seen．That was that she remembered． When she woke up a day later，she found her in hospital．

66．after改為before 67．加had 68．√ 69．but改為and 70．spend改為spending 71．the改為a 72．in去掉 73．In改為On或Upon 74．that改為what 75．her改為herself

Answer 1

分析 在這個女孩還沒來得及解釋她發(fā)生了什么事，近一周的時間過去了．一天下午，她坐船遇到了風暴，臨近傍晚時，船撞到了巖石，她跳到了水里．然后向岸邊游了整整一夜．第二天早晨，她看到前面有光，她知道岸很近了．一上岸她就掙扎著向有光的地方走去．那就是她能記得的事情，醒來時，她發(fā)現(xiàn)自己躺在醫(yī)院了．

解答 Nearly a week passed after the girl was able to explain
                                before
what∧happened to her．One afternoon she set out from the
       加had
coast in a small boat and was caught in a storm．Towards

evening，the boat struck a rock but the girl jumped into the
                                              and
sea．Then she swam to the shore after spend the whole night
                                                        spending
in the water．During that time she covered the distance of eight
                                                               a
miles．Early in next morning，she saw a light ahead．She knew
                  去掉
she was near the shore．In arriving at the shore，she struggled
                                  On/Upon
towards the light she had seen．That was that she remembered．
                                                             what
When she woke up a day later，she found her in hospital．
                                                             herself
1．after改為before．句中before表示來不及…就…
2．加had．句意表達的是過去的過去，要用過去完成時態(tài)．
3．正確．
4．but改為and．句意表達的是承接，不是轉折．
5．spend改為spending．句中spend位于介詞after后，要用動名詞．
6．the改為a．短語搭配，a distance of多遠的距離．
7．in去掉．next引導的時間狀語，前面不用介詞．
8．In改為On或Upon．on/upon后接動名詞，表示一…就…
9．that改為what．句中she remembered是作系動詞的表語，是一個表語從句；從句中remember缺少賓語，要用連接代詞．
10．her改為herself．邏輯指代錯誤，句中指代的是她自己．

點評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎知識．�？嫉闹�識點有：名詞（單復數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．