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【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1）每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2）只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
Dear Sue ,
How time flies. It is a month that you stayed with us. We all miss you and are very grateful to what you did for us when we were together.
We had an English speech contest the others day and I won the first prize, which again remind me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the tree what was planted by us together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday we went there and got it water. The tree you planted yourselves is growing well and whole class decided to name it Sue wood. Will you come back to see Sue wood?
How is everything with you later? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in
All the best
Liu Hua

Answer 1

【答案】①that改成since；②remind改成reminds；③what改成that/which；④water改成watered；⑤yourselves改成yourself；⑥good改成well；⑦whole class前加the；⑧l(xiāng)ate改成lately；⑨student改成students；⑩close touch with刪掉with
【解析】這是一封書(shū)信，介紹劉華進(jìn)行的情況和發(fā)生的事情。
①考查固定句型�！癐t's / It has been + 一段時(shí)間 + since + 時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句”中,譯作“自從…以來(lái),已經(jīng)…，在此句型中主句的謂v.用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)；從句的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用一般過(guò)去時(shí),而且須是終止性動(dòng)詞。故將that改為since。

②考查主謂一致。在此句中，which引導(dǎo)非限定性定語(yǔ)從句，它補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明的是前面這件事We had an English speech contest the other day and I won the first prize, 即這件事是remind的主語(yǔ)，主語(yǔ)是一件事情，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用單數(shù)形式。故將remind改為reminds。

③考查定語(yǔ)從句。what不能引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，只能引導(dǎo)名詞性從句（如主語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句、表語(yǔ)從句）。Which， that 可以引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，并且都可以在定語(yǔ)從句中充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)或賓語(yǔ)。which指代的先行詞只能是物，that指代的先行詞既可以是物，也可以是人。故將what改為which/that。

④考查被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。It和water之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，意為它被澆灌。故將water改為watered。

⑤考查反身代詞的應(yīng)用。句意為你自己種的樹(shù)長(zhǎng)勢(shì)良好，無(wú)復(fù)數(shù)含義，故將yourselves改為yourself。

⑥考查副詞。修飾動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用副詞而不是形容詞，所以用well修飾growing，故將good改為well。

⑦考查冠詞。the whole+名詞 是特指。特指是我們班，不是別的班。故在whole前面加the。

⑧考查副詞辨析。 later adj. & adv. 為late比較級(jí)，意指較遲，較晚一些，lately adv. (=recently) 最近，近來(lái)，通常用于現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)，句意為你近來(lái)怎么樣，故將later改為lately。

⑨考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。句意為“我們希望知道更多關(guān)于你和你的美國(guó)同學(xué)�！蓖瑢W(xué)不止一個(gè)，所以應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將student改為students.

⑩考查介詞。keep in close touch with意為與…保持密切聯(lián)系。With的后面無(wú)賓語(yǔ)，所以不用介詞。 故刪去with。