Question

6．假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Peter想選修中文作為外語，為此寫信征詢你的意見．請按以下要求給Peter寫封100詞左右的回信．
1、鼓勵他選修中文；
2、中文的魅力（兩點）；
3、學好中文的意義（兩點）．
注意：信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Peter，
Nice to receive your letter，in which you sought for my advice on whether you should choose Chinese as a second language．
        ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息美國朋友Peter想選修中文作為外語，為此寫信征詢你的意見．請按以下要求給Peter寫封100詞左右的回信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：鼓勵他選修中文；中文的魅力（兩點）；學好中文的意義（兩點）．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：seek for尋求；a wise choice明智的選擇；for one thing一方面；for another另一方面；What's more而且；do well in在…方面做得好；hesitate to do 猶豫的去做；
Nice to receive your letter，in which you sought for my advice on whether you should choose Chinese as a second language．（高分句型一）
For one thing，Chinese is certainly one of the oldest and most beautiful languages that are still being used in the world．（高分句型二）
For another，the handwriting of Chinese is quite special and unique，thus helping you create a new thinking way．（高分句型三）
Learning Chinese well，you can communicate with the largest population in the world，which helps you with more opportunities to make a career．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Peter，
       Nice to receive your letter，in which you sought for my advice on whether you should choose Chinese as a second language．（高分句型一） I consider it as a wise choice．
       For one thing，Chinese is certainly one of the oldest and most beautiful languages that are still being used in the world．（高分句型二）For another，the handwriting of Chinese is quite special and unique，thus helping you create a new thinking way．（高分句型三）Learning Chinese well，you can communicate with the largest population in the world，which helps you with more opportunities to make a career．（高分句型四）What's more，the Chinese language is sure to give you a glimpse of the colourful culture of China．
       May you do well in learning Chinese．If you have any problems，don't hesitate to write to me．
       Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．