Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在該詞下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

One day in the restaurant where I worked, I am serving a table of four and each person had ordered the different kind of fish. Three plate were already on the table when the man closest to me pointing to one plate and asked me the name of the fish on it. Before I could answer him, he continued ask me the name of the fish on another one plate. I was about to answer him while I noticed that the last plate on my tray (托盤) began to fall. They fell noisily to the floor seconds late, spreading its contents on the carpet. Everyone stared me and I stood there with a red face.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 am → was ;

 the → a ;

 plate → plates ;

 pointing → pointed ;

 ask →asking/to ask ;

 去掉one;

 while → when ;

 They → It ;

 late → later ;

 stared → stared at ；

【解析】

試題分析：本文講述了作者在做服務(wù)員期間的一次經(jīng)歷。一天作者給一個四人桌的顧客端菜，其中一位顧客不斷地問這盤上是什么魚，那盤上是什么魚，作者正要回答時他托盤上的最后一盤菜卻滑了下來，摔到地上，引得眾人側(cè)目，弄的作者非常尷尬。

 考查動詞時態(tài)。I am serving a table of four 根據(jù)上文語境One day in the restaurant where I worked,可知應(yīng)該用一般過去時，所以把am改為was 。

 考查冠詞用法。each person had ordered the different kind of fish.由語境可知此處不是特指概念，表示“一種不同的”要用a different kind of +名詞，所以把the 改為 a 。

 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。Three plate were already on the table，因為plate是可數(shù)名詞，而且前面又有three修飾，所以把 plate改為plates。

 考查謂語動詞。when the man closest to me pointing to one plate 根據(jù)結(jié)構(gòu)判斷此句中缺少謂語動詞，所以把pointing 改為 pointed 。

 考查非謂語動詞。he continued ask me the name of the fish，根據(jù)動詞用法可知continue 后面跟動詞不定式或動名詞做賓語，所以在ask前加to或把 ask改為asking。

 考查不定代詞用法。 the name of the fish on another one plate，another后面直接跟單數(shù)名詞或者不定代詞，此處語義重復(fù)，所以去掉one。

 考查連詞用法。I was about to answer him while I noticed that ……根據(jù)語法可知be about to do 只和when從句搭配，所以把while 改為 when 。

 考查代詞用法。They fell noisily to the floor 從上文可知此處指的是魚從盤子里掉下來，根據(jù)語境可知魚是一條，所以把They改為 It 。

 考查副詞用法。They fell noisily to the floor seconds late, 表示“多長時間后”需用“時間段+later” 表示，所以把late改為 later。

 考查固定短語，Everyone stared me。  stare是不及物動詞，盯著看要用stare at ，所以在stared 后加介詞at 。

考點：考查短文改錯。