19.閱讀下面短文,然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文
Some post-80s graduates have given up the dream of working in a big city,and heading back home has become part of future job consideration.Two of the more common ones are trying to avoid the intense competition and the pressure,and seeing unprecedented opportunities in the growing economies back home.
Changping.a(chǎn) 22-year-old student from Hainan University,said that if he would decide on starting his business,he'd certainly return to his hometown,Xiangfan,in Hubei Province.That was because he has his own network of people who could help him in every way.Also,he could get some good business ideas like setting up advanced kindergartens in small cities.If no one was doing that,the chance of being successful seemed higher.
But Chen Haihua,a college student from Guangzhou Medical College,said that she would plan to stick to a big city,Guangzhou,instead of going back to her hometown,Zhanjiang,in Guangdong Province.She wanted to struggle in the big city for a more exciting,better life.She explained that she also could be a role model,letting the kids in her hometown work hard Io go to key universities.
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1)以約30個(gè)詞概括該短文的內(nèi)容;
2)然后以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓蜆I(yè)方向的看法,內(nèi)容包括:
①試分析在大城市和回家鄉(xiāng)就業(yè)各自的有利因素;
②如果你大學(xué)畢業(yè)了,你會選擇在哪里就業(yè)?
③選擇的理由.
[寫作要求]
1)作文中可以使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子
2)作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確,語言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,語篇迮貫.

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作,這類作文可按照三段式模板寫:第一段:概況所給短文要點(diǎn).第二段:過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由.第三段:個(gè)人觀點(diǎn).特別要注意第一段的概括.用自己的語言概括,不能照搬照抄原文. 時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).人稱用第一和第三人稱. 重要短語:avoid sth(避免某事),seek a job(尋找一份工作),prefer to(更喜歡),compete with(與…競爭),fierce competition(激烈的競爭),live a cosy life (過著舒適的生活),as for (關(guān)于,至于),make a living(謀生),would rather do sth(寧愿做某事),gain experience(獲得經(jīng)驗(yàn)),thanks to(多虧了),grow into(長成),do good to (對…有好處),after graduation(畢業(yè)).
【高分句型一】
1.①Working in a big city is of course an exciting thing,②which means better opportunities and more conveniences.
①此處是動名詞短語"Working in a big city"作主語,謂語動詞用單數(shù).
②此處是非限制性定語從句,關(guān)系代詞在從句中作主語,指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容.
【高分句型二】
1.While in a small town,where there are not so many elites to compete with,one can easily avoid the pressure from fierce competition in big cities to live a rather cosy life.
此處是由"where"引導(dǎo)的地點(diǎn)狀語從句,主句為"one can easily avoid the pressure from fierce competition in big cities to live a rather cosy life".
【高分句型三】
3.①Though hard,②struggling itself may gain me enough experience of doing business.
①此處是從句中的省略,可以理解為"Though it is hard",主句為"struggling itself may gain me enough experience of doing business".
②此處是動名詞"struggling itself"作主語.
【高分句型四】
3.Thanks to the intense competition,I can grow into an experienced and competitive person,which does good to my later development.
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句,主句為"I can grow into an experienced and competitive person",關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語,指代整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容.

解答 Post-80s graduates hold different views towards job choices.Some,like Changping,will head back home to avoid the competition and pressure in big cities,while others,like Chen haihua,would prefer to stay in big cities to seek a better job.(概念)
Working in a big city is of course an exciting thing,which means better opportunities and more conveniences.【高分句型一】It's easier to find a well-paid job or a better platform to improve oneself.While in a small town,where there are not so many elites to compete with,one can easily avoid the pressure from fierce competition in big cities to live a rather cosy life.【高分句型二】(分析在大城市和回家鄉(xiāng)就業(yè)各自的有利因素)
As for me,a girl from a remote village,I would rather struggle in a big city like Shenzhen to make a living than go back to my hometown.Though hard,struggling itself may gain me enough experience of doing business.【高分句型三】(如果大學(xué)畢業(yè),會選擇在哪里就業(yè))
Therefore,after graduation,I will choose a big city as the start of my career.Thanks to the intense competition,I can grow into an experienced and competitive person,which does good to my later development.【高分句型四】(選擇的理由)

點(diǎn)評 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合,要求考生既能讀懂文章信息,又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容,其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要,根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括,總的來說,遵循以下步驟:確定主題句;尋找關(guān)鍵詞;重構(gòu)主題句;重組支持句.寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次,平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型.

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