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4．下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤．請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)上該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞． 2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11除起）不計(jì)分．
Dear manager，
I'm one of your customer．The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop．Before I left，I do check it carefully and everything was all right．When I got home，therefore，I found a fault with it．The problem is what the"Play"doesn't work at all．Probable it's not your fault and so is mine．Anyhow，I can't solve the problem in person．
You see，a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved．Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay，when you accept my letter．

Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!
Your sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于一封投訴類(lèi)的書(shū)信．作者前天在商店購(gòu)買(mǎi)了一款隨身聽(tīng)來(lái)幫助自己學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)，在商場(chǎng)時(shí)好好的產(chǎn)品但是回到家后就不能用了，所以寫(xiě)信給商店經(jīng)理，希望他能夠給予最快的解決和答復(fù)，本文旨在向商家投訴產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量．

解答 Dear manager，
    I'm one of your customer．The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your
                            customers
shop．Before I left，I do check it carefully and everything was all right．When I got
                                did
home，therefore，I found a fault with it．The problem is what the"Play"doesn't
           however                                                              that
work at all．Probable it's not your fault and so is mine．Anyhow，I can't solve the
                   Probably                               neither/nor
problem in person．
      
You see，a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait
                                              use
for too long before this problem is solved．Hopefully you will deal with the walkman
 
without delay，when you accept my letter．
                                      receive
    Hoping to hear ofyou in the earliest possible time!
                          from                                                    
                                                         Your sincerely，
                                                             Li Hua
1．customer-customers．前面的one指代其中之一，所以one of后面需要跟名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式；故答案為customers．
2．do-did．結(jié)合前后的時(shí)態(tài)可知，這是陳述的過(guò)去的事實(shí)，所以此處應(yīng)該使用表示過(guò)去的助動(dòng)詞did；故答案為did．
3．therefore-however．后面一句I found a fault with it和前面一句everything was all right是相互矛盾的，所以應(yīng)該是表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系；故答案為however．
4．what-that．后面的句子為一個(gè)陳述句the"Play"doesn't work at all所以is后面缺少一個(gè)引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句的引導(dǎo)詞that；故答案為that．
5．Probable-Probably．后面是兩個(gè)完整的句子，所以用來(lái)修飾句子的是副詞，不能是形容詞；故答案為probably．
6．so-neither/nor．a(chǎn)nd連接的為兩個(gè)并列的成分，根據(jù)前面的否定詞not可知，and后面的也應(yīng)該是否定結(jié)構(gòu)；故答案為neither/nor．
7．useful-use．本句考查句型be+of+名詞，該句型相當(dāng)于be+該名詞對(duì)應(yīng)的形容詞，表示事物的性質(zhì)如何；故答案為use．
8．wait for-wait．因?yàn)楸揪渲袥](méi)有賓語(yǔ)，所以不需要加介詞for；故答案為wait．
9．a(chǎn)ccept-receive．本文屬于投訴類(lèi)的書(shū)信，所以應(yīng)該是經(jīng)理收到這封信時(shí)希望他能夠給予重視和解決；故答案為receive．
10．of-from．hear from意為"收到某人的來(lái)信"，這是書(shū)信末尾的一種寫(xiě)信人的愿望；hear of意為"聽(tīng)說(shuō)、聽(tīng)到"；故答案為from．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文屬于短文改錯(cuò)類(lèi)文章閱讀．考生在做題時(shí)需理清文章的事理，注意詞性、語(yǔ)態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換，分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)．