Question

6．假設(shè)你叫李華，你的美國朋友Peter來信邀請你今年暑假美國旅游，并到他家去做客．但你經(jīng)過考慮后，謝絕了他的邀請．請你根據(jù)以下提示和要求給Peter寫一封回信．
提示：
1．謝絕Peter的邀請；
2．陳述原因（旅游費用高，增加家庭負擔；暑假打工，積累社會經(jīng)驗）
3．補救措施（寄一本《今日中國》）．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear from you．                                            
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 該書面表達為提綱類，考生在答題時要把所有的要點都包括在內(nèi)：1．謝絕Peter的邀請；2．陳述原因（旅游費用高，增加家庭負擔；暑假打工，積累社會經(jīng)驗）3．補救措施（寄一本《今日中國》）．另外時態(tài)的選擇為一般現(xiàn)在時．適當使用高級句型和過渡連接詞．
（高分句型一） it cost a lot to travel abroad，which will add an extra burden to my family．
該句型使用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，which充當主語；
（高分句型二）I can not only earn some money to cover my expenses but also improve my social skills．
該句型使用not only…but also引導(dǎo)句子，表示不僅…而且…；
高級詞匯：I regret to do 遺憾做；due to因為；burden負擔；
First of all，Besides，not only…but also…

解答 Dear Peter，
      I'm glad to hear from you．Thank you very much for inviting me to America this summer．I'd like to accept your warm invitation，but I regret to say that I can't go to your hometown and visit you．（謝絕Peter的邀請）
     （陳述原因）I decline your invitation just due to the following reasons．First of all，（高分句型一） it cost a lot to travel abroad，which will add an extra burden to my family．Besides，I plan to do a part-time job in the summer vacation．（高分句型二）I can not only earn some money to cover my expenses but also improve my social skills．For the reasons mentioned above，I believe you can understand why I can't accept your invitation．I hope this won't affect our friendship from the bottom of my heart．
     （補救措施）I want to send a book named China Today to you to offer my apology．You will have a better understanding of China by reading it．Wish you a pleasant summer．
                                                                                                    Yours'
                                                                                                     Li Hua

點評 提綱類在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點，寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需要積累短語和重要句型．