Question

18．假定你是李華，下周將有一位新外教來你班任教．你的班主任計(jì)劃舉辦一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短的儀式．就此請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．打聽旅途情況；
2．簡(jiǎn)介班級(jí)情況；
3．期待成為朋友．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear sir，
Welcome to our school．
It must be a very tiring journey that you have taken the plane for a long time．I want to know whether there is anything uncomfortable for you and how you feel now．（高分句型一）I hope everything will be OK with you．
Now let me introduce something about our class for you．There are 52 students in the class，including 30 boys and 22 girls．（高分句型二）We get along well with each other．However，unfortunately，we are poor in English，especially in speaking and writing．（高分句型三）So I hope we can become friends soon．In that case，we can help each other in life and study．China is a beautiful country that has many places of interest to visit．I'm willing to be you tour guide in the future．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息下周將有一位新外教來你班任教．你的班主任計(jì)劃舉辦一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短的儀式．就此請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：打聽旅途情況；簡(jiǎn)介班級(jí)情況；期待成為朋友．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：for a long time好長(zhǎng)時(shí)間；including包括，包含；get along well with與…相處的好；be poor in在…方面差；in that case假若那樣的話；places of interest名勝古跡；be willing to do愿意做某事
I want to know whether there is anything uncomfortable for you and how you feel now．（高分句型一）
There are 52 students in the class，including 30 boys and 22 girls．（高分句型二）
However，unfortunately，we are poor in English，especially in speaking and writing．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear sir，
       Welcome to our school．It must be a very tiring journey that you have taken the plane for a long time．I want to know whether there is anything uncomfortable for you and how you feel now．（高分句型一）I hope everything will be OK with you．
       Now let me introduce something about our class for you．There are 52 students in the class，including 30 boys and 22 girls．（高分句型二）We get along well with each other．However，unfortunately，we are poor in English，especially in speaking and writing．（高分句型三）So I hope we can become friends soon．In that case，we can help each other in life and study．China is a beautiful country that has many places of interest to visit．I'm willing to be you tour guide in the future．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．