Question

【題目】假如你是高一年級新生李華。開學(xué)之初，你的英語老師Mr Wu希望了解每位同學(xué)的英語學(xué)習(xí)情況，并征求教學(xué)建議。請按以下要點用英語給她寫一封信。

1.對英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識； 2.自己英語學(xué)習(xí)存在的主要問題；

3.對英語教學(xué)的兩點建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr Wu，

I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher. ______________________________________________

yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Wu，

I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.

With your help, I have got a brand new understanding of English study. As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English well means we can see the world through a new window.

My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. As a result, I’m not as active as other students in English class.

I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. And What’s more, give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.

Thank you!

yours

Li Hu

【解析】

試圖分析：教學(xué)建議。請按以下要點用英語給她寫一封信。1.對英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識；2.自己英語學(xué)習(xí)存在的主要問題；3.對英語教學(xué)的兩點建議。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點說明】本文是一篇英文書信，格式正確，內(nèi)容齊全，布局合理，使用高級句子。As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, As引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句；mastering English well means we can see the world through a new window.動名詞作主語；the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，and that I often feel nervous when speaking English.兩個并列的表語從句；I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.運用賓語從句；另外，With your help, As a result, What’s more,的運用為文章增色添彩。