Question

9．假設(shè)你是李華，你和你班的交流生Tom約好晚上一起去看電影．但你的叔叔突然打電話說(shuō)他出差路過(guò)你們城市，讓你去車站接他．請(qǐng)你給Tom發(fā)一封電子郵件，要點(diǎn)如下：
1．表示歉意；
2．重新約定．
注意：詞數(shù)100左右．
Dear Tom，
I am very sorry to tell you that I can't go to the cinema with you tonight．（高分句型一）My uncle telephoned me just now．He told me he was passing our city on a business trip and wanted to pay a visit to us，so I have to meet him at the railway station．（高分句型二）I wonder if we can see the film tomorrow．If you are free then we will meet together at 7：00 p．m．a(chǎn)t the gate of the cinema．If this change is not convenient to you，it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie．（高分句型三）
Best wishes
Yours
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封電子郵件，寫作時(shí)，首先要寫清要點(diǎn)，包括：表達(dá)歉意，解釋原因，重新約定時(shí)間，在解釋原因的時(shí)候，要有一定的邏輯，并且再次表示歉意．其次，要注意使用第一人稱，最后還要注意時(shí)態(tài)，以一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主．
【范文亮點(diǎn)】：
本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格符合書信的文體要求，是一篇較好的范文．"I am very sorry to tell you that I can't go to the cinema with you tonight．"本句使用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．"If you are free then we will meet together at 7：00 p．m．a(chǎn)t the gate of the cinema．"本句使用了if引導(dǎo)的條件句．"it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie．"本句中開(kāi)頭的it做形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是to inform me of it，還使用了短語(yǔ)so that，使文章語(yǔ)言自然流暢，內(nèi)容過(guò)渡自然，增加了文章的可讀性，使文章的表達(dá)更具有邏輯性，更富有條理．
 I am very sorry to tell you that I can't go to the cinema with you tonight．（高分句型一）
He told me he was passing our city on a business trip and wanted to pay a visit to us，so I have to meet him at the railway station．（高分句型二）
If this change is not convenient to you，it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I am very sorry to tell you that I can't go to the cinema with you tonight．（高分句型一）My uncle telephoned me just now．He told me he was passing our city on a business trip and wanted to pay a visit to us，so I have to meet him at the railway station．（高分句型二）I wonder if we can see the film tomorrow．If you are free then we will meet together at 7：00 p．m．a(chǎn)t the gate of the cinema．If this change is not convenient to you，it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie．（高分句型三）
       Best wishes
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．