分析 考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題,并有部分的文字提示.給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大.對于考生的綜合能力要求較高,要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力.在完成開放性作文時,首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型,在你的能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時要賦予變化,因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭.同時也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體,在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候,可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:It is known that…眾所周知;devote…to致力于,獻身于;Thanks to幸虧,由于; More importantly,更重要的是;As for 至于,關(guān)于;Actually事實上;However然而;
To help more people to get enough food,Yuan Longping has devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice.(高分句型一)
More importantly,Yuan Longping is willing to share his achievement with others,which contributes to ridding the world of hunger.(高分句型二)
It is his devotion that makes him successful and his devotion has inspired me a lot.(高分句型三)
解答 I am very glad to share my topic with you.The person I admire the most is Yuan Longping,an agricultural pioneer of China.It is known that there exists hunger in many countries.To help more people to get enough food,Yuan Longping has devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice.(高分句型一) Thanks to his research,the output has been doubled.More importantly,Yuan Longping is willing to share his achievement with others,which contributes to ridding the world of hunger.(高分句型二)
As for me,Yuan Longping is the greatest person in the world.It is his devotion that makes him successful and his devotion has inspired me a lot.(高分句型三)Actually,I have some difficulty in learning English.However,where there is devotion,there is a way.I really believe that my devotion can make me expert in English.
Thank you for your listening.That's all.
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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