Question

【題目】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Growing up on a small farm, I lived a life that I took for granted. My father worked in the city as a plumber(水暖工).He was not highly educated, but he was smart, looking at problems in an engineer’s way. He was a man made of leather, brass and chewing tobacco who tried to teach my brother and me useful things, including respect. He also had a temper and was strict with us for he would scold us when we made some careless mistakes. Sometimes, my father seemed like a distant enemy to me and I didn’t like him very much.

One day I came home from primary school and his car was already there. Once inside, I was told by my mother that he didn’t feel well. His back hurt. My father never missed work; in fact, when he came home, he went to the barn to work even more. I remember looking at him secretly around the corner as he lay on his bed in the middle of the day.

Later, my mother told me he got multiple myeloma(多發(fā)性骨髓瘤),a type of cancer. As the cancer grows, the person will shrink because the disease destroys the body’s energy and the abnormal antibodies cause problems for other cells and tissue. Bones eventually look like Swiss cheese, and when they break, they may never heal. But I didn’t realize that my father’s time was rather limited and just treated him the same way I used to.

For the last year of my fathers life, his entire day consisted df rising from his hospital bed in the living room and walking to his chair to sit and think. He was predictably in that chair when I came home one day during the ninth grade. I do not remember where my mother and brother were, but the two of us were alone.

Paragraph 1 :

He asked me to sit down and what he told me still moves me these decades Later.

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Paragraph 2 :

At that moment, I realized that he was doing more than telling.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1 :

He asked me tosit down and what he told me still moves me these decades later. Lying on the hospital bed, he told me about his life on the farm, his family, his loves, and his heartbreaks. Although he was tortured by the cancer, his inner self rushed out to me in a great flood as if a pipe had burst all of a sudden. He had been speaking for maybe an hour or more and mentioned that he actually felt regretful about being so strict with us.

Paragraph 2 :

At that moment,I realized that he was doing more than telling. He was asking to be forgiven. All it took was to understand that was what he needed, and I forgave everything, immediately. The thought of my father being an enemy disappeared, with tears rolling down on my face. I held my father's hands tightly, enjoying this deep but quiet love. Although he has gone for a long time, I still always remember that moment and the realization that I love him.

【解析】

本篇書面表達是讀后續(xù)寫。

通過閱讀所給文章可知，作者在一個小農(nóng)場長大，他的父親整天忙于工作和農(nóng)活。父親對作者和弟弟一直比較嚴格，因此有時作者感覺父親對他來說就像一個遠處的敵人。這種情況直到父親身患癌癥也沒有發(fā)生改變，直到有一天父親把作者叫到病床前，和作者敞開了心扉。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：他讓我坐下來，說了一些幾十年后仍讓我感動的話�？芍�，接下來第一段續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該是父親和作者說話的具體內(nèi)容，應(yīng)該是與他生活息息相關(guān)的內(nèi)容，也會有對孩子的些許愧疚等。第一段開頭是：在那一刻，我才意識到父愛無言�？芍�，第二段應(yīng)該側(cè)重講了作者對自己與父親之間關(guān)系的感悟或?qū)Ω赣H離去的不舍等內(nèi)容。