Question

1．假定你是李華，最近你在當(dāng)?shù)貓?bào)紙上看到一則游泳培訓(xùn)班的廣告，稱其有稱職教練（instructor），一周包會(huì)．你會(huì)一點(diǎn)游泳，但水性不太好，想在暑假參加訓(xùn)練．請你寫一封咨詢信了解相關(guān)情況，要點(diǎn)如下：
1．訓(xùn)練的具體時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)．
2．條件和費(fèi)用．
3．其他特別注意的事項(xiàng)．
注意：1．詞數(shù) 100 詞左右．
可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear Sir/Madam，
I have read your advertisement in the newspaper．You mention in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week's training．
I can swim a little but I'm not very confident in the water．So I'm interested in taking the training course during the summer holiday．I'm writing to inquire when and where the course will be given and how long it will last each day．I also want to know whether your company provides everything necessary and how much you will charge me．Besides，is there anything special that I should be prepared for？
I look forward to hearing from you soon．
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封咨詢游泳培訓(xùn)班的信．根據(jù)要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一敘述廣告的內(nèi)容；二描述自己的情況；三詢問訓(xùn)練的具體時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，條件和費(fèi)用以及其他特別注意的事項(xiàng)；四表達(dá)期盼．
高分句型：
1．You mention in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week's training．句子里 第一個(gè)that 引導(dǎo)mention的賓語從句；第二個(gè) that 引導(dǎo)ensure的賓語從句； fully qualified 表示"完全具備資格的"．
你在廣告中說，你們有稱職教練，一周包會(huì)．
2．I also want to know whether your company provides everything necessary and how much you will charge me．句子里I also want to know 有兩個(gè)賓語從句，一是whether引導(dǎo)的 your company provides everything necessary，whether表示"是否"；二是how much 引導(dǎo)的you will charge me，how much 表示"多少錢"．
我也想知道你們公司是否提供所有必要的東西，你們收費(fèi)多少．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
       I have read your advertisement in the newspaper．You mention in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week's training．【高分句型一】（敘述廣告的內(nèi)容）
      I can swim a little but I'm not very confident in the water．So I'm interested in taking the training course during the summer holiday．（描述自己的情況）I'm writing to inquire when and where the course will be given and how long it will last each day．I also want to know whether your company provides everything necessary and how much you will charge me．【高分句型二】Besides，is there anything special that I should be prepared for？（詢問訓(xùn)練的具體時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，條件和費(fèi)用以及其他特別注意的事項(xiàng)）
I look forward to hearing from you soon．（表達(dá)期盼）
Sincerely yours，
                                                             Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 考查提綱類作文．
寫作的步驟：
第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時(shí)態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá)．
第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，套用句型，上下銜接，地道表達(dá)，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．