Question

14．澳大利亞位于最小的洲--大洋洲，是世界第六大國家．根據(jù)下表用英語介紹一下澳大利亞．
寫作內(nèi)容

氣候	干旱氣候為主，少部分沿海地區(qū)有重組的雨量
總面積	7692024平方公里
人口	大約2300萬
兩大城市	墨爾本和悉尼
風(fēng)光特點	明媚的陽光，數(shù)不清的牛羊和奇特的野生動植物
旅游	世界各地的游客來到這里欣賞它獨特的美景

墨爾本：Melbourne
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只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容．
評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫．
Located in the smallestcontinent-Oceania，Australia is the sixth largest countryin the world．It covers a total area of 7，692，024 squarekilometers with a population of about 23 million．It is amainly dry country with only a few coastal areas that have adequate rainfall．As is known to all，Melbourneand Sydney are the largest cities．Because itis famous for its bright sunshine，countlesssheep and cattle and its unique wildlife，thetourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery．．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息寫一篇短文，介紹一下世界第六大國家，且 位于最小的洲---大洋洲的澳大利亞這個國家的相關(guān)情況．既是提綱作文又是圖表類作文．時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．人稱以第三人稱為主．重要短語：be located in （位于），covers a total area of  （覆蓋…的面積），a population of …（…人口），be famous for…（因…而著名），all over the world（全世界），enjoy its scenery  （欣賞風(fēng)景）．
【高分句型】
1．As is known to all，Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities．
這里是as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，as 在從句中作主語．
2．Because it is famous for its bright sunshine，countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife，the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery．
這里是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．

解答 Located in the smallestcontinent-Oceania，Australia is the sixth largest countryin the world．It covers a total area of 7，692，024 squarekilometers with a population of about 23 million．（總面積、人口） Itis a mainly dry country with only a few coastal areas that have adequaterainfall．（氣候）As is knownto all，Melbourne and Sydney are the largestcities．【高分句型】（兩大城市） Becauseit is famous for its bright sunshine，countlesssheep and cattle and its unique wildlife，thetourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery．【高分句型】（風(fēng)光特點、旅游）

點評 寫好這類圖表及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將要點完整地表述出來，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等．