Question

19．以下是2014年中國某城市交通事故發(fā)生原因的調查信息統(tǒng)計表，請根據此表，寫一篇120-150字的文章．你的文章需包括：
1．簡要描述下表
2．談談你的看法和建議

Main accident causes	Number or accidents in 2014	Percentage rise （+） or fall （-） over 2013
1．drivers turning left without due care	608	+10%
2．drivers traveling too close to other vehicles	411	+9%
3．pedestrians crossing roads carelessly	401	+12%
4．drivers driving under the influence of alcohol	281	+15%
5．drivers failing to give a signal	254	-5%

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提綱類"形式，根據文章所給提示信息寫一篇關于2014年中國某城市交通事故發(fā)生原因的調查信息統(tǒng)計的文章，既是提綱作文又是圖表類作文．
時態(tài)應該用一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱以第三人稱為主．
重要短語：witness sth（見證，目睹某物），alarge number of（許多），bedue to （由于），thelack of …（…的缺乏），be responsible for （對…負責），imposestiff new penalties （實施嚴厲的新處罰），reinforce one's awareness （強化某人的意識），remindsb of sth （提醒某人某物），indispensable （不可缺少的，責無旁貸的）．
【高分句型】
1．the year of 2014 has witnessed a large number of traffic accidents in a certain Chinese city，which are due to five main causes．
這里是which引導的非限制性定語從句，which在從句中作主語，指代前面主句的內容．
2．the public traffic safety education should be widely spread，reinforcing both drivers'and pedestrians'safety awareness．
這里是現(xiàn)在分詞reinforcing作伴隨狀語，主句主語the public traffic safety education與動詞reinforce構成邏輯上的主動關系．
3．No matter what measures are taken，the real intention is not to punish but to remind people of the preciousness of life．
這里是由No matter what引導的讓步狀語從句．

解答 As what can be seen from the above table，theyear of 2014 has witnessed a large number of traffic accidents ina certain Chinese city，which are due to five main causes．【高分句型】Among them，drivers'careless turning left isthe leading one followed by drivers'driving under the influence of alcohol becauseof its largest percentage increase．（描述表格）
What hide behind these five causes aredrivers'neglect of traffic rules and the lack of reverence for life，thepedestrians'life．And，of course，pedestrians should also be responsible fortheir own life．（看法）Therefore，relevant authorities shouldimpose stiff new penalties，including paying large amounts of fines and criminalcharges，on drivers caught because of drunk driving or other illegal behaviors．And also，the public traffic safety education should be widely spread，reinforcingboth drivers'and pedestrians'safety awareness．【高分句型】No matter what measures are taken，the realintention is not to punish but to remind people of the preciousness of life．【高分句型】You should know that for your families，youare the indispensable one．Cherish life，love life．（建議）

點評 寫好這類圖表及提綱式作文的關鍵是認真分析所給提示信息，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將要點完整地表述出來，并認真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．