Question

18．請根據(jù)如圖寫一篇100～120個詞的短文．你的短文應(yīng)包括下列要點：

1．簡要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容．
2．說明圖畫含義．
3．從中學(xué)生的角度談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ畢⒖荚~匯：container n．容器．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：As is shown in the above picture，the moment the mouse gets into the huge container full of food，it starts to enjoy the crops busily，totally ignoring the potential danger．本句是一個較復(fù)雜的句式，as是一個關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)了一個定語從句，as在此指代的是主句the moment the mouse gets into the huge container full of food，it starts to enjoy the crops busily，totally ignoring the potential danger的內(nèi)容；ignoring是現(xiàn)在分詞在句中做伴隨狀語，邏輯主語為the mouse； the moment 此處為時間狀語"一…就"的連詞引導(dǎo)了時間狀語從句．
高分句型二：The picture vividly conveys the message that one cannot just focus on the present comfortable life without making preparations for his/her future．這是一個同位語從句．從句that one cannot just focus on the present comfortable life without making preparations for his/her future是名詞message的同位語．

解答 As is shown in the above picture，the moment the mouse gets into the huge container full of food，it starts to enjoy the crops busily，totally ignoring the potential danger．（高分句型一）After it consumes the last grain of crop，to its horror，it suddenly finds itself trapped in the container．（描述圖畫）
The picture vividly conveys the message that one cannot just focus on the present comfortable life without making preparations for his/her future．（高分句型二）We students can certainly learn something from this．Some of us are addicted to video games and don't take their study seriously．All that they care about is the present‘happy'life．But the truth is that if we don't study hard now and equip ourselves with enough knowledge and skills，we will get into serious trouble in the future．So，to avoid the miserable ending of the mouse，let's take action now!（闡明觀點）

點評 要寫好英語的看圖作文首先，要根據(jù)題目所要求及畫面展示確定好題材與體裁．其次，要確定好行文的人稱與時態(tài)的基調(diào)．再次，要在句與句以及段與段之間加一些表轉(zhuǎn)折、遞進和因果等關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞與過渡句，使文章前后照應(yīng)，行文流暢．