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12．目前，越來越多的中學生利用周末上各種各樣的培訓班或請家教．對于這一現(xiàn)象，存在兩種不同觀點：

有些人認為有必要	另一些人認為沒有必要
跟老師學比自己學好 可以鞏固課堂所學內容 可以學到更多的東西	容易養(yǎng)成依賴習慣 學生需要時間休息 許多培訓班和家教以贏利為目的

請您根據(jù)以上提示，以Is a Training Class of Family Teacher Necessary？為題，寫一篇120詞左右的短文，反映表中內容，并簡要闡述自己的觀點．文章開頭已給出，不計入總字數(shù)．
要求：層次清晰，連貫流暢；表達靈活，不要逐字逐句翻譯．
參考詞匯：鞏固strengthen；
Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary？
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend．There are two different viewpoints about it．
Some thinks it necessary．Firstly，it's more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves．Secondly，it can strengthen what is learnt in class．Besides，they can learn a lot more．Others think it unnecessary．For one thing，students can easily form the habit of dependence．For another，students need time to relax from time to time．What's more，the purpose of many training classes and teachers is to make money．
In my opinion，whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends．If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject，maybe it's OK for you．But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher，otherwise it would be a waste of time and money．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇話題類作文，短文標題、開頭及寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，我們所要做的就是根據(jù)題目內容寫一篇英文短文．由于題干給出的要點比較簡潔，所以需要對要點進行擴展．題目中的要點都要提到，缺一不可．要反映表中內容，并簡要闡述自己的觀點．另外，要注意不要偏離文章中心，寫作時注意層次清晰，連貫流暢；
【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語from time to time時不是；in one's opinion在某人看來；be interested in對．感興趣；Firstly，it is more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves．這個句子it做形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式；What is more，the purpose of many training classes and teachers is to make money．這個句子運用到不定式做表語；In my opinion，whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends這個句子運用到whether引導主語從句；

解答 Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary？
       More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend．There are two different viewpoints about it．
      Some thinks it necessary．Firstly，it's more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves．Secondly，it can strengthen what is learnt in class．（高分句型一）Besides，they can learn a lot more．Others think it unnecessary．For one thing，students can easily form the habit of dependence．For another，students need time to relax from time to time．What's more，the purpose of many training classes and teachers is to make money．（高分句型二）
       In my opinion，whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends．If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject，maybe it's OK for you．But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher，otherwise it would be a waste of time and money．（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．