【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

No one lives without a dream. Whether the path is smoothly or tough,we are on the path to achieving it . As a senior 3 student, I have the same dream like my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three years, I have done everything I can equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoy the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Anxiety and pressure discourage him now and then. Therefore, with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make out it.

I’m sure that there is still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter how challenged it is, I’ll make it come true. As the proverb says,“Where there has a will, there’s a way.”

【答案】

【1】smoothly- smooth

【2】like-as

【3】can后加to

【4】that-what

【5】enjoyed-enjoy

【6】him-me

【7】therefore-however

【8】去掉out

【9】challenged-challenging

【10】has-is

【解析】

【1】smoothly- smooth考察形容詞。系動詞后接形容詞構成系表結構。文意思通向夢想的道路不管是順利或者艱難，我們在通往成功的道路上。

【2】like-as考察介詞。The same as是固定搭配，表示“同樣的”，文意是作為一個高三的學生，我與其他的同學一樣有著同樣的夢想，希望我能進入一所理想的大學。

【3】can后加to考察不定式。I can是插入語，可以省略不提，文意是我所做的一切事情都是為了裝備我自己。

【4】that-what考察引導詞。這里what引導賓語從句并充當其賓語,that只起連接作用。文意是我向老師學習來裝備我自己。

【5】enjoy-enjoyed考察動詞。我享受到了學習的樂趣，是I have enjoyed the pleasure of study，當not only放在句首時要使用半倒裝結構，即謂語動詞的助動詞前提。文意是我不進享受到了學習的樂趣，而且距離夢想更近了一步。

【6】him-me 考察人稱代詞。文中人稱代詞使用錯誤，文中全文使用的是第一人稱。文意是壓力正在不時地使我感到泄氣。

【7】therefore-however考察轉折連詞。壓力正在不時地使我感到泄氣，在老師和同學們的鼓勵下，我相信我能克服它，兩句前后是轉折關系，所以用轉折連詞however。

【8】去掉out考察介詞。Make out是固定搭配，表示“理解”的意識，用在此處不合適。文意是在老師和同學們的鼓勵下，我相信我能克服它。

【9】challenged-challenging考察動名詞。文意是無論多么困難，我都將實現(xiàn)我的夢想。

【10】has-is考察謂語動詞。Where there is a will, there’s a way.是諺語，表示“有志者事竟成”，陳述的是一般事實，所以用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)即可。

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